Myself

Actually, I use this poem in the start of school of about me

Who am I

and what am I

finding the truth

of my life

the meaning

of why am I born

search for my hobby

search for everything

This life

seems meaningful

or meanness

I might want to die

but I still lives

cause I am I

no one can control my life

I am myself

no one can be me

Search in this world

success my dreams

is that all?

No

enjoy the love

the care

around you

feel the fresh sir

enjoy living

never give up

World is

full of music

music sing out

my feeling

so enjoy them

try to find the truth

inside the music

Enjoy my life

till the end

your family

your friends

stays besides you

you might cry

of their dying

be still

never cry

So still living

still searching

still thinking

cause you are living

Author's Note

Yes, as the descibtion says, that's school use of about me...
Is this strange or anything?
Tell me!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your question is most people question of why do we live and what is our purpose? I learn with the birth of my first child. I had a purpose now. Life seem like a endless road of work, pay bills and to survive. A wise and lucky person stay away from debt. Each year do a great vacation and see the things we want. A very strong poem. You made me think. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Dalebear]

Good Write

[Rhonda]

this is awesome

[Kimberly]

No, this isn't strange, it's good.

[Sweets]

"but I still live" not lives.
"World is
full of music
music sing out
my feeling
so enjoy them
try to find the truth
inside the music" I loved those lines the most :D

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[Red]

This is how I'm kind of feeling right know. I'm wishing for happier days to come. Your writing may not be flawless, but is no doubt a beatiful work of art.
-Red

[Short.Nerd]

Nice(:

[~Lizzy♬]

I love what Coyote said about your chapter. It is a strong poem and you also made me think. My mind was racing throughout the poem about lots of things. You have te talent towrite

[Moonflower]

I think every one feels this way at some point in life, not strange at all, though it may feel that way. You will find yourself, dear, have patience.