no matter what

no matter what

A Poem by chris' girlfriend
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For Chris Torres

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No matter what happens,

i will always be there for you

even if we eventually go our seperate ways,

i will always be there for you

even if one day you start to treat me like im nothing,

i will always be there for you

even if one day you become deathly ill,

i will always be there for you

if one day you find someone new...

I will still be there for you

© 2008 chris' girlfriend


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May
awww.. this was sooo sweet!!! i'm sure chris feels really loved!!!! i wish someone loved me like that...

nice job!

~may

Posted 11 Years Ago


Loyalty is beautiful thing. True love does forgive even thought new boundaries are set. You made devotion clear.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really sweet, and captures the complete and utter devotion that we have for someone that we really care about. It gets to the point where we love them so much, that they can do no wrong, even if it means going off with someone else. Great job! (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was really good dana i loved it!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aww that's sweet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, how beautiful...to know that the love for someone still continues even after the relationship is over...love in its purest form! I love the repetition of "i will still be there for you" it really gives the poem a lot more power, emotion and feeling because of it! Great job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you bunni i love you so much!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True love conquers all. A beautifully written poem filled with that true, pure love. It's always nice to have someone to feel like that about.

Great poem!

Josie

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think that this piece captures what true admiration.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very well written...I have once been here wih one of my ex's....and yet I am still there for her when she needs me....very good point

Posted 11 Years Ago



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i love chris torres!!!! i have a cat~Shadow, a rat~Quinn and a tarrantulla~Clarissa favorite color~ purple favorite band~ Lamb of god, and The Used favorite animal~ cats and walruses my religion is .. more..

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