Promises

Promises

A Poem by ~ Stefanie ~
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When a promise is spoken, it is not meant to ever be broken.

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No matter what lies ahead,

I promise to be there for you.

 

No matter what was in the past,

I promise to help you forget.

 

No matter what the future holds,

I promise to always love you.

 

You said no matter what lies ahead,

You’d be there for me.

 

You said no matter what went wrong in my past,

You’d be there to help me forget.

 

You said no matter what the future holds,

You’d always love me.

 

Now how come I kept my promises?

But you BROKE every one of yours…

© 2011 ~ Stefanie ~


Author's Note

~ Stefanie ~
I hope you enjoyed this one :) I hope it flowed well and sounded right! Thank you for any ratings or reviews :)

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ouch, the sting of that ending is very keenly felt! Really nice piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Promises are made to be kept. Sometime promises are forgotten and we are left alone to figure out why? I like how you started the poem. Hopeful and content. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a great poem to recite when someone breaks their promises, definitely something I can relate too. Great poem yet again:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Promises! Unlike me I cant cos I really dont fulfill them but you are so wonderful. Keep it going.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Real nice write Stefanie.
The first half is my favorite; great sentiments.
:D

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was so expressing of what in your heart ..
you expresed that so well :D
great write :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think your poem flowed flawlessly, so no worries about that. I think the structure of the poem is brilliant. The split in the middle aided the poem in flowing well and (whether you meant it or not) shows a parallel with the broken promises. Awesome job! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


So sweet:) I really liked this one! Spot on everything! Wonderful write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh my gosh! Totally describes what I'm going through right now. LOVE IT.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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~ Stefanie ~
~ Stefanie ~

Dreamland, DE



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