In The Rain

In The Rain

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
"

Rain is so romantic

"

  

When I see your face in the rain

it is more mesmerizing then

a rose covered in morning dew

with your natural beauty

making nature green with envy.

 

When I kiss your lips in the rain

they become the juices of life

that I savor on my tongue

just like a fine red wine

shared by soul connecting candlelight.

 

When our bodies meet in the rain

yours becomes a graceful waterfall

that surronds me with its passionate flow

and consumes every crevice of my body

with its sensual flow and bubbling desire.

 

When we make love in the rain

you become my erotic ocean

that sweeps me away

in your current of ecstasy

to my own fantasy island.

 

And Like the rain you are a miracle from heaven

bringing new life to my lonely planet.

 

© 2008 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The rain is so romantic

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And Like the rain you are a miracle from heaven
bringing new life to my lonely planet.

Very sensual, romantic write. There is something about the rain and water in general that can be so exotic and passionate. But beyond that, rain being the metaphor for love and passion as two spirits and bodies connect, washing away the loneliness..... is penned beautifully

.. as always







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I agree with your Author's Note, the rain can be very romantic indeed as in this beautiful scenario you've created here ... The feel, the scent, the sound, the taste and the beauty when you are with someone you love makes it even more special, erotic as well as enchanting ... The flow of your poem is absolutely amazing! I loved the passion in this sensuous poem, Dale! Beautifully written ... hugs

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is very sensually beautiful and leaves the mind to wander and form a story from your well written poem. I really like how the first sentence of each stanza describes what is to come and how this graduates from beginning to end. Each word is like the rain----so romantic as you remind us. Good luck in the contest!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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The poem is so beautiful, and just as romantic as the setting described. Thank so for sharing this, it truly is beautiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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That's pretty Dale. Reminds me of the kind of rain that is soft, without thunder and lightening. The steady rain that surrounds and makes you just feel all warm. I have to agree, rain IS romantic. Nice write. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....honey this is so beautiful...I love your heart

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So tranquil and peaceful natures wonders mates so well with the wonders of love. Very romantic and sweet.

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O!
This was too good...i especially loved how u ended it....
making nature green with envy is funny....and clever!

I must say....all songs with 'Rain' in it, i just LOVE!!

(now singing Madonna's Rain....feel it on my fingertips....)

x,
O!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is stunning Dale, it is romantic and beautifully crafted. You chose your words with great care, that is obvious throughout. This is sensual and very wet! You have mastered the technique of writing with decorum and grace. You put your reader at ease with wonderful imagery born out of observatory skill.
I loved it...Kudos from me...
Helen :-)

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JC
Well, eh, hmm... got to get the fan and a cold drink.

Beautiful


JC

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rain is renewal...life giving...refreshing...lovely piece. I simply enjoyed floating away with it!
~Lorraiyne

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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