Chapter Twelve: Spreads like fire

Chapter Twelve: Spreads like fire

A Chapter by The old me

Chapter Twelve: Spreads like fire

We arrive at the church. One of the other creatures is lying on the floor. It looks like it has been stabbed. It must have been by Amy, she still had the angel knife. The main demon turns to me.

“Where did you guys get that knife?”

“I don’t know. She had it.”

I had to lie. I didn’t want it to know I talked to an angel. It may not like it.

The demon looks at me and tries to read me. It then tells me something.

“Well I need to alter the deal a bit. I need you to go in there and kill her.”

“That wasn’t part of the deal.”

“Well you need to do it.”

“Well how do I even kill her? She has a knife.”

“You are right. Here.”

It hands me a knife. It basically is a craved out and sharp human bone.

I place in my pocket and I head to the church. I push open the door and walk in. I take a few steps in when the door behind me slams. The angel is standing there. He speaks.

“John, you must not kill her.”

“I have to save Hannah.”

“You know this isn’t the way to do it.”

“Well it seems like you can’t stop me so I’m going to do what I have to do.”

I call out for Amy. She calls back to confirm it’s me. She walks into the main room. The angel just then disappears and she doesn’t ever see him. She walks up to me with a torch in her hand. She speaks.

“How did you escape?”

“They let me go.”

“What?”

“They don’t want me. They want you.”

“Why?”

“I don’t know.”

“Why are you here?”

“To get you to come out or to kill you.”

“Why?”

“It is either you or Hannah.”

“Please don’t.”

“I have no choice.” I move towards her.



© 2011 The old me


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I hope he finds a loophole somehow >.>...terrible.


Posted 12 Years Ago


I think you could develop the dialogue a little more here.

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