intimate cursive...

intimate cursive...

 

 

Sadistic kisses,

my lips are masochistic

so torture me till dawn

let me taste the blood of bad intention

i will bathe in it

and your aura, even as my mouth bleeds 

words of endearment,

 

and my breath vacillates     

before the cut of the tongue

tells me you are leaving

and i ask for a napkin

to wipe the blood

 

spilled from my 

wounded pen

that loved every 

beautifully agonizing moment

of osculation

with yours.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/10/19

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I see the author of these lines totally captivated under the spell of another. Relishing each moment "that loved each beautifully agonising moment of oscillation with yours". Could be another writer, or the author's muse. I felt some yearning and intensity here. The title tells me that also.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, Chris

j.

[kitty]

Very descriptive these captivating words that play with the readers imagination. Real impact there! thanks for sharing Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, kitty,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This has a Poeish feel to it, a macabre tone as the torture chamber and the bloodied scene are portrayed in an allegory of a relationship that was failing then ended. Love the image of the curves meeting like bodies.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, John,
j.