A long way to heaven for poets
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
A long way to heaven for poets.
I posted a review of your poem
then my review got reviewed
and so on and so on
until the original poem
ended up in limbo
no one remembered
who wrote what, when and why
"ignore grammar and spelling" was said
somewhere along the line
or at the beginning of the rope
that eventually hung the poet
with a wry smile
and several reveiws layter.
erin-cilberto
12/21/23
© 2023 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
You, jacob, could turn a pillow-case inside out and convert it into one of your poems - in fun time too! You seem able to touch funny bones as well as minds and hearts, sir. May your Friday be a peaceful and chuckling one.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you for your kind words, em,
j.
1 Year Ago
You're welcome. :)
Laughing....very clever dear Jacob O really enjoyed!!! Bravooo
Posted 1 Year Ago
Laughing....very clever dear Jacob O really enjoyed!!! Bravooo
1 Year Ago
Thank you, Silmara...glad I might give you a smile.
j.
i hhad a chukle miself... grate litle peece/
Posted 1 Year Ago
i hhad a chukle miself... grate litle peece/
1 Year Ago
Ha ha, thanks, John,
j.
Ha, ha, loved your poem (she said reviewing)
Posted 1 Year Ago
Ha, ha, loved your poem (she said reviewing)
1 Year Ago
Ha ha...you gave me such a smile this morning, Norma,
thanks,
j.
the allure in this piece was dished out 10 fold.
i am not sure if that was english what i just typed.
{absolutely loved this one. bravo.}
Posted 1 Year Ago
the allure in this piece was dished out 10 fold.
i am not sure if that was english what i just typed.
{absolutely loved this one. bravo.}
1 Year Ago
I do think it was...lavender.
Thank you,
j.
The fish took the bait on that line then hook line sinker !
Great write Jacob enjoyed it
Posted 1 Year Ago
The fish took the bait on that line then hook line sinker !
Great write Jacob enjoyed it
1 Year Ago
even if it was only a bluegill...it was worth the battle.
thanks, Julie,
j.
Was that my review? Or was that my poem? I loved this one Jacob only a true poet could end it the way that you did. I hope that this review does not result in the same outcome.
Posted 1 Year Ago
Was that my review? Or was that my poem? I loved this one Jacob only a true poet could end it the way that you did. I hope that this review does not result in the same outcome.
1 Year Ago
ha ha, I think not.
thank you, Soren,
j.
ignore grammar and spelling I would never say, they are important. Reviewing the review made me smile. Some poems generate conversation. I am guilty of this myself. You are so funny and clever. You had the last word here dear J. Way to go:)
Chris
Posted 1 Year Ago
ignore grammar and spelling I would never say, they are important. Reviewing the review made me smile. Some poems generate conversation. I am guilty of this myself. You are so funny and clever. You had the last word here dear J. Way to go:)
Chris
1 Year Ago
Thank you, Chris...I wish I had spelled the last word correctly...:)))
A wander-full circle affect.
Posted 1 Year Ago
A wander-full circle affect.
1 Year Ago
Thank you, Chris...
j.
Guilty i am afraid especially with a few poets here who have become friends over the years, chit chat tends to happen on reviews...
Posted 1 Year Ago
Guilty i am afraid especially with a few poets here who have become friends over the years, chit chat tends to happen on reviews...
1 Year Ago
Hey, chit chat is a good thing...
j.
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jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
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