Resurrection of Love

We have come to a turning point in our endeavors

In our love, we have found an error

We would leave if we were smart,

We would leave if we were clever.

But you beg and you plead

You get down on your knees

You exclaim that you will do whatever

Until those beautiful eyes begin to bleed.

You see my eyes of wonder

I see your tears of trust

How can we revive this love

By not solely relying on lust

But we give it another chance

Just as foolish lovers do

It always started with me

But now it should end with you.

Reviews

[Simon Welsh]

I love it. Sometimes a second chance is brave as it is reckless. Perfect.

[Erica Ross]

Thank you !

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is a very powerful poem. Great rhythm, rhyme and flow. The last two lines are killers! Definitely ties the whole poem together to let the reader know that this will not be a rekindling out of desperation. Very well done, Erica.

[Erica Ross]

:D Thank you so much !!!