Introduction

Alison Angel- Age: Around 14-15 (when she died.) Bio: She was found dead at her father's house. Her father was found guilty of her murder. Alison (Ali), returned at a castle. She had no idea that she was dead. She can't escape the castle, because there are too many hallways, splicers out to get her, and there are too many wanderin souls in the castle.

 

Sasu- Age: Unknown. Bio: She is one of the splicers. (A splicer is someone who feeds on the happiness of someone he/she kills.) She wants to get rid of Alison. She can't speak at all, and she is just a drifting ghost. She died, and like Alison, she just awoke in the mysterious castle.

 

Juliet- Age: Unknown. Bio: Juliet (Juli), is a wandering soul. She was alive when the castle wasn't haunted. She isn't a very nice person, she has attitude, and she's always just floating around the hallways. She never sleeps.  

 

 

Zeke Dark- Age: Around 15-16 (when he died.) Bio: He is another wandering soul. He one day runs into Alison. He helps Alison in any way he can, and he just floats by. He can change forms, so no one knows his true self.     

 

Author's Note

Sorry if this isn't very good. Comment and tell me what you think. Tell me if I should continue the story... :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You gave very little of the story. I like the characters. Could be a great story. Spirit with history and a strong character. I would read. I will read the next chapter.
Coyote

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[NXT Eoin]

Hmm, this could be good.

[~Lizzy♬]

It is good so far. I am going to start reading it. ;)

Keep going I am interested to see how the story unflolds

[Keevan]

Interesting. Can't wait to read it! :)

(Pssst! Just thought I'd point out your spelling error: Last line of first paragraph--"wandering".)

I rate thee 100!

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

oooh, sounds mysterious, i wanna read more

[KaySea]

very nice