~Pausing on a sigh

~Pausing on a sigh

A Poem by Frieda P

I paused in your disposition,
an excerpt of my sentiment's
timely extracted passages
affection's cadenced inclinations
complexion's blush'd bias tendencies
dusky clouds amidst delectation's reflections
wildflowers breath at the nape of my neck
scent'd of twilight's mysteries & amber brandy
a calm filled of shivers kind sympathy and tea
parched of wither'd revered druthers, 
begotten heavy sighs of never forgotten harmony
etch'd within scorched reminiscence's memoirs
rewritten script'd blossomed desires on dusty shelves
smoldering in long ago places of nightfall's rhythm 
haunting wakeful hours of dreams without rhyme
wistful for the dance 'tween spaces of sublimity's poesy  


© 2014 Frieda P


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Dear Frieda, you have a mastery over transporting your reader to places that can only exist in some impossibly beautiful realms of their beleaguered minds...Here, I was transported to a beautiful, hazy twilight with a dream lover in a quaint, lovely villa full of comforts, a poor, harassed me can only think of...

scent'd of twilight's mysteries & amber brandy
a calm filled of shivers kind sympathy and tea
parched of wither'd revered druthers,
begotten heavy sighs of never forgotten harmony
etch'd within scorched reminiscence's memoirs
rewritten script'd blossomed desires on dusty shelves

A thundering ovation!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Divya, that's the best compliment a poet could ever get, if you felt transported I'm .. read more



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Such a serene place you took me to, Friedalicious!...

I can always count on going to a utopic place when I read your words...
The sky's the limit, and your butterfly wings have endless possibilities....

Beautifully penned!~xoxo~:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

If this took you to Utopia I'm totally jazz'd Robbie, thanks so much my sweet friend... ;-) xox
How utterly lovely, Frieda! Truly, you have the soul of a poet...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Angel...
Now there is a use of words! A song all of its own. You've really got a handle on such writes Frieda. I am astounded.

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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Coming from a poet I admire so much, that really means a lot, thanks so much Ken.
Your imagination is unparalleled Mrs.R, as is your talent. It's becoming increasingly difficult for me to offer elaborate reviews as much as I want to...sometimes I just have to marvel at your gift...I'll never know how you manage to churn out such masterpieces on a daily basis...what can I say, you're the best :) xo

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kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Always a pleasure love ;) xo
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

What women's hockey is finito? ;-) x
kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Haha It's done for today, the playoffs start tomorrow though ;) xo
Well the song is one of my newest favorites.....I absolutely love it!! Play it on youtube all the time. And your poem sighed within my heart. Those sweetest moments may be tucked away on shelves or in other places but it only takes a few words to draw them forward in our minds. So we may relive them with the softest sighs. xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Red, appreciate the sigh, love this song too. xo
Very cleverly constructed mosaic of metaphors. Nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Mark.
Beautiful piece that made me sigh smiling. Superb as always.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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BlackRose

7 Years Ago

Your very welcome. Have you seen the new ones I put out? When you get the chance. Thanks. :o)
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Will do, my RR list was doing something naughty last night it seems,and gave birth to a slew of newb.. read more
BlackRose

7 Years Ago

Haha OK, thanks
great romance, deeply moved by your craft

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Grazie mille Sayed.
You made me sigh while reading this, it's wonderful. I especially love the line "wildflowers breath at the nape of my neck". :]

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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Always appreciate a sigh Brittany, thanks. :-)
dear Frieda... "wildflowers breath at the nape of my neck".
How delectably sweet and tender... as if you were the
promise of spring. "Affection's cadenced inclinations" is
a lovely Valentine... dear heart. truly... Pat

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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Pat.
Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

Snowdrops and love kisses... Have a
fantastic Valentine escapade... Pat

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