~ Moonrise, Moonset ~

I sigh 

in light

 of the moon, 

hung so low

     unfolding

 early morns

of the skies' 

        soothing  

iridescent pinks 

   in sea blue depths

sun reflecting 

     off its face                         

enraptur'd

thoughts again,

as twilight 

    seeks

a brilliant

finale in

  showy illumination

taking a bow

dipping in its

   amethyst glow

reminding me

  of twinklin'

 diamond glints

   in your 

  come hither eyes

   & the warmth

       of your touch ~

 hopelessly

   unfurl'd

    in lit  

    shadows

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

I have wanted to comment on this heart filled poem, but honestly didn't think I could say anything that would do justice to your artististic efforts. I have come back to it, actually it has drawn me back many times now, it's like it owns me or something, HA. I know, strange huh! I think of these lines often: reminding me
of twinklin'
diamond glints
in your
come hither eyes
& the warmth
of your touch ~
And I think about the colors of early morning and twilight, of the way it's a time for walks and holding hands and telling all the secrets that make us who we are... it's a time for risking everything..... Frieda, it's just simply beautiful.
~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your humbling review Curt, muchly appreciated. x

[ANM]

Lovely writing great use of words! So descriptive!

[Baby Ricochet]

Lovely romantic imagery here. Good one

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby, jazz'd you enjoyed.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Beautiful imagery and flow... another stunning poem, Frieda.. love it!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Lori, so good to see your smiling face here on the cafe again. :-)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Thanks, Frieda.. glad to be back and reading your gorgeous poetry

[Madalyn Beck]

Beautiful imagery you have here, Frieda! I adored reading this tonight. It has calmed my ever churning mind. xo :)

[Frieda P]

What a sweet thing to say Madalyn, thanks muchly! :-) xo

[Bright Ocean Star]

Frieda, It was beautiful. It was captivating. Thank you for sharing it. I love to go sit outside and watch the moonlit sky. I love the sea blues and pink shimmering purples. I think your poem perfectly captures this wonderful time of day/night.

[Frieda P]

Sounds really luverly Anne, thanks so much.

[Shubhangi]

nice poem frieda....i have shelved this one too!

[Frieda P]

Woo, doing the happy dance, thanks muchly!

[Anand Sehgal]

hung so low

unfolding

early morns

of the skies'

-------- heavenly sight :) loved it :)
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[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Anand.. :-)

[Aethereal]

This is a beautiful love poem. We rally round the glory of the Moon to discover what we have in common with it, and in doing so we admire each other all the more. Everything in our universe is interconnected.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Aethereal, glad you enjoyed.

[Bookworm]

This is great. I love it.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit and review Bookworm, much appreciated.

[kublakhan27]

You know I try to offer in-depth reviews with every piece I read Mrs.R, but given the volume of input you've already received, and the general awe that you've left me in here, I can only sigh in rapt admiration. I salute your poetic genius with the utmost conviction...you have once again proven that you are the best poet on this site...just incredible...xo

[Frieda P]

You truly humble me Steve, thanks so much for your kind words my sweet friend. xo

[kublakhan27]

You're most welcome Frieda :) xo