~ Moonrise, Moonset ~

I sigh 

in light

 of the moon, 

hung so low

     unfolding

 early morns

of the skies' 

        soothing  

iridescent pinks 

   in sea blue depths

sun reflecting 

     off its face                         

enraptur'd

thoughts again,

as twilight 

    seeks

a brilliant

finale in

  showy illumination

taking a bow

dipping in its

   amethyst glow

reminding me

  of twinklin'

 diamond glints

   in your 

  come hither eyes

   & the warmth

       of your touch ~

 hopelessly

   unfurl'd

    in lit  

    shadows

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

I have wanted to comment on this heart filled poem, but honestly didn't think I could say anything that would do justice to your artististic efforts. I have come back to it, actually it has drawn me back many times now, it's like it owns me or something, HA. I know, strange huh! I think of these lines often: reminding me
of twinklin'
diamond glints
in your
come hither eyes
& the warmth
of your touch ~
And I think about the colors of early morning and twilight, of the way it's a time for walks and holding hands and telling all the secrets that make us who we are... it's a time for risking everything..... Frieda, it's just simply beautiful.
~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your humbling review Curt, muchly appreciated. x

[paddy d daly]

Colourful imagery missus, I could lay back on an easy chair and drink that in, :)

[Frieda P]

Glad you kicked back irish...thanks so much :-)

[paddy d daly]

welcome ! :)

[redflutterby]

This is pure magic....twilight in all its amazing granduer! Your words make me long to sit on the beach with a margarita to enjoy the sight. Sigh... ;-)xo

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a perfect plan to me, thanks Red ;-) xo

[Cryingkate]

I say hooooooooooo to you.

what a grand finale my friend,

Wow Your Right Frieda
Wow we all made it thru another day !
We did it together.

All the friends helped each other get thru another day.
We are all stronger for it !

I'm on "Inspirational Hill With My Friends" :--)

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed Connie. ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and words. A beautiful journey. Your use of words create places and visions. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote.