Fine China

I see you.

it is always -always- a pleasure
to see you
my heart aches, my flowers wither
I still see you
and like a fine china
I am not allowed to touch you

May or September
It's time to surrender

Author's Note

I lost my other account. :(

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Methinks there is some pondering going on here. Admiring someone from a distance, not being able to get close to them. Then your final two lines make me think there may be a shift in thinking. Fine China is precious. Maybe this admired person is too. Maybe it's time to get to know them better.

Chris

[Lale]

Some wishes are better left ungranted, my dear.

[Chris Shaw]

Ah, then you can admire from a distance :)

[barleygirl]

I love the first three lines so much, I have a hard time processing the rest of your message. I believe that most people do not tell each other often enuf or enthusiastically enuf how much we are pleased to see one another, yet people crave this acknowledgment. Your poem looks simple on the surface, but reaches down into the heart of the matter for most people. I also love the line about fine china, look but don't touch. So many of the things/places/people we fall in love with, in life, happen like that! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Lale]

Hello @Margie, thank you for your lovely review.
I hope you have a wonderful day. (((HUGS)))

[emipoemi]

B - R - I - LLIANT!! This just exudes poetry and I have nothing but praise for it. Well done!

[Lale]

You've no idea how happy I feel to get such lovely reviews. Thank you for your overwhelming review. I'm looking forward to reading your work.

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

and looking forward. hope you enjoy them.

[Esteban Morfín]

I loved the idea! Pretty but distant. Beautiful but cold. Well done!
I'm sorry about your other account. Why don't you ask for help with the contact form? They had blocked me by accident and I asked for help and they solved it.

[Lale]

Hello @Esteban, thank you for your kind review.
I don't think it would help since I lost the password of the email.

[sandra]

I am enjoying your writing. I find it so beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Lale]

Hello @sandra, thank you for reading.

[Unspoken poet]

So very nicely written and expressed

[Lale]

Hello @kay-T
Thank you, enjoy :))

[emmajoy]

A wistful post, but seems to hold far more than it shows. Gently mysterious. Thank you for inviting me. Take care, keep safe. 'Clueless'

[Lale]

Hello @emmajoy, thank you for accepting me. looking forward to reading your writings.. thanks your lovely review.

[wordman]

time to surrender,sounds like a good thing

[Lale]

Done long time ago.. no regrets..

[wordman]

never say never

[wordman]

theres always another tomorrow

[Lale]

some changes are necessary

[wordman]

of course,that`s always a big factor