If an Angel appears

If an Angel appears before you,

Holds out his hand and says “come join me, I’ll show you where the heavens meet the earth”

Would you take it, and let him fly you away

 

If you take his hand, he’ll fly you over the mountains, over the rivers, over the seas

He’ll show you the beauty he sees in the world, he’ll show you...

 

If an Angel appears beside you,

Puts a hand on your shoulder and wipes away your tears

Would you slap his hand away and say don’t

 

If you let him, he’ll make you smile with each passing day,

He’ll show you there is good in the world, he’ll show you...

 

If an Angel appears behind you,

Wraps his arms around you and with a single beat of his great wings blows your troubles away

Would you pull away, and say no

 

If you let him, he’ll fight for you with all his heart, he’ll fight for you till he can’t fight anymore

He’ll give anything to hold even if the cost is his grace, he’ll give anything...

 

Everyone waits for their Angel but no one looks for the Angels that have already given their wings and watch over you from the shadows,

Everyone waits for their angel but no one looks for the Angels that have already stood by you and fight for you every day,

Author's Note

this doesn't sound right to can anyone help

Reviews

[InterijentoWrites]

Puts a hand on your shoulder and wipes away you** tears-- should be your

If you let him, he’ll fight for you with all his heart, he’ll fight for you tell** he can’t fight anymore-- Should be until.

This is a very nice piece. Some formatting needs to be done so it isnt such an eye-sore, and looked appealing to the eye. But other than the two mistakes I mentioned, I didnt find anything else. This is a well worded piece, and very true, honest. Everyone is looking for whats ahead, not what is right infront of them. Keep up the good work.

[Mercy]

Love this -positive and thought provoking. Such Angels are rare and precious. Those who have had them in their lives are blessed.

[Roe]

i love this we all need Angels to wash our troubles away

[Coyote Poetry]

We need those Angels. Allow us to be stronger and they whisper positive thoughts to keep us going forward. I like the positive and hopeful feel of the poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote