Our Melody

Our Melody

A Poem by Mir
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I honestly don't even know where these kind of poems are coming from!

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Take my hand.

Close your eyes.

Breathe me in.

Just free your mind.

 

It’s only us.

Time does not exist.

There’s no need to rush.

Just enjoy this bliss.

 

Trace my lips,

As you hear me speak.

Can you hear the thumping,

Of my racing heartbeat?

 

Let your hand,

Graze my cheek.

As I listen intently,

To the words you speak.

 

Do you feel the air,

Brush by your skin?

Do I stir up something

Deep within?

 

Relax your muscles.

You’re safe with me.

Forget the world.

As we make our own melody. 

 

© 2012 Mir


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really good job :) it tells a good story :) the presentation is awesome :) great job )

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really, really nicely done, I enjoyed that. Great writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

I didn't realize I had already reviewed this. See that, it was great the second time too. hahaha
Mir

11 Years Ago

Haha, well I'm glad it was enjoyable even though you've already read it! :) Thanks for review again!.. read more
Relic

11 Years Ago

Welcome again. :D
Though you don't know where these kind of poems are coming from,yet it is a pleasure
to feel that you have an inviting and amorous heart.
Your assurance of giving safety means a lot.
Wonderful work.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Thank you!:)
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)
I absolutely adored this. It's so sweet and tender. Beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Very nice :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
A sweet poem...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome .:)
I love this poem, it's absolutely beautiful and romantic. This is what love is really all about,a simple touch, timeless and gracefull, you made the words flow so well as though we could almost hear the melody playing as we read. You're really good and have a great gift at writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

thank you so much! :)
LadyInk

11 Years Ago

Well thank YOU for writing this amazing piece of art! :D
Nicely done with an easy flow and fun attitude.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your review! :)
Relic

11 Years Ago

You're welcome Miranda.
So I'm not the only one who just has things come to them.
This is beautiful, it has a Melody all it's own.
It is very romantic, it captures you, read this to yourself before meeting a new perspective boy friend. It will help you be more in touch with your romantic self.
Great Job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing! :)
Very sweet and touching, great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

/thank you! :)
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

My pleasure

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Added on November 23, 2012
Last Updated on November 24, 2012
Tags: time, bliss, love, heart, heartbeat, melody

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