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Teen Mothers

Teen Mothers

A Poem by trainwreck
"

Things are never as they seem.

"

She had one chance to say no,

But she decided to let go,

To give up everything that mattered

Just ten short seconds ago,

Her world was shattered

But it was real,

Just Unknown.

 

Her boyfriend heard about her.

He wanted to break her heart

And show her how his world fell apart,

But he believed a dream,

(He was just as "Crazy" as she)...

He heard her love song,

And held her close. 

Gave up a life he'd almost known.

 

Her "Friends" called her

A s**t and called her trash,

She lost everything supposed to last.

But her boyfriend took it like a man,

Became her husband,

And took a kid that wasn't his.

And they said she was another Jewish w***e,

Another rat with her tassels on the floor....

 

She couldn't make it to the doctor

When she started having labor pains,

She didn't let it stop her,

She had a baby

In a tiny hick town alone,

Without her mom, but with a song. 

 

Her husband saw his step-son,

And gave his virgin wife a kiss.

They whispered in the dark...

"Let's call him Jesus."

 

 

© 2011 trainwreck


Author's Note

trainwreck
God's always working behind the scenes. :)

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When I started to read this I was thinking of teen mother, but the end surprised me so, so much. At first I looked at the tag of Christmas and I thought it was crazy. Haha This was an amazing read. I believe as long as you remember Jesus then Christmas is special.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Lovely! I love the unexpected twist!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very unique perspective, I don't think I've ever read something like this before. Good piece, well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this! Its a wonderful poem, you really captured me with the title:D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 15, 2010
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I'm Heidi. I normally write songs, but these are the things I write when I have nothing better to say in lyrics. I am a Christian, but my work is, honestly, not overly religious. I am passionate a.. more..

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