The Clarity of Snow

The Clarity of Snow

A Poem by icelandicblue

There in your eyes
I see a blizzard of emotion,
we are blinded by life’s persistent gales
so we huddle beneath warm woolen memories

and wait for the sun to push its bright eye
between the clouds and blink its glistening halo
across the soft fresh snow of possibilities,
it is then I see your face, once again, for the first time.

© 2014 icelandicblue


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-- ah... i know that feeling but didn't know how to describe it... -- magical poetry...

Posted 8 Years Ago


icelandicblue

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I wasn't sure how that last line would fly.
.

8 Years Ago

-- you're very welcome... :)
Reunions are blissful wonderful and you. Created that

Posted 8 Years Ago


icelandicblue

8 Years Ago

Thank you annar.
It would be great to be able to see that person for the first time and get to begin all over again. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


icelandicblue

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
I am really loving your poems, I do not know how i have been missing all this. I am glad to have had the first read. Keep writing

Cass

Posted 8 Years Ago


icelandicblue

8 Years Ago

I appreciate your comment Cassie.
Seemed your love (fantasy) dream got slipped down into deepen words from your thought invoking head. So touching & mesmerizing poetry. Enjoyed reading it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


icelandicblue

8 Years Ago

So for the delay in thanking you for your kind comment.
Simply beautiful. This one touched me as I read today Icelandicblue.

Posted 9 Years Ago


icelandicblue

8 Years Ago

Hi Will~
Thanks for the review. Sorry for the delay in getting back to you.
I think this is my favorite by you so far. I don't know why, I just love the words. The way you put such beautiful words together is a gift. Bravo, my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


icelandicblue

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Brit. I do appreciate that.
Such hope and beauty in this simple piece. I especially like the feeling of huddling under a blanket of woolen memories. Lovely thought.

Posted 9 Years Ago


icelandicblue

9 Years Ago

Thank you KL. It' nice to see you.
Like the first buds of spring peeping through; love survives no matter what. T

Posted 9 Years Ago


icelandicblue

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for stopping by Terpsichore.
lovely strong poetry - warm woolen memories. That's my favorite line.

Posted 9 Years Ago


icelandicblue

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Tammy. I kind of like that line as well.

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