like one, two?

good luck perished time,

you'll be silver like a bullet,

and you'll gonna have my blessing.

but before I just continue

try to notice beautiful sky,

- what are you really able to buy?

and everything is better

when you colide two cold feathers.

so go and slowly die,

take your wings and fly,

listen greenish lullaby,

nothing is lower then high.

Reviews

[Tiffany Boles]

I like it, nicely written :)

[isus]

thank you, glad you like it

[K. Hicks]

Great read isus! loved it

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Pam]

Another great poem from you! :p

[isus]

you really think so? thank you :)

[MandaBear]

beautifully written my friend

[isus]

Thank you Manda :)

[icelandicblue]

Real lasting beauty and time are impossible to buy, they both fade or perish over time. You've got a lot of interesting images and thoughts in this one.

[isus]

thank you.

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was beautifully deep. xo winter

[isus]

thanx winter

[TL Boehm]

nothing is lower than high. High is so hard to maintain when stasis resides at ground level. A deep write, friend.

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Angel]

The one thing we definitely cannot buy is perished time...
It passes by us so quickly...and then...it is over.
Your poetry always makes me exercise my lazy brain...
And that can only be a good thing.
Excellent job, my friend!

[isus]

im really glad you like it, its nice to know that someone understand :)

[Diana]

Time likened to silver bullets... Ahh...it pierces. Do you mean blessing in the last line in stanza 1?

I like the question of what we are able to buy. We are not able to buy that which we most need, love, friendship, etc.

The last stanza inspires a great deal of analysis.

[isus]

yeah, i mean blessing :D thank you, ill edit right now. glad you find it interesting :)

[Pryde Foltz]

but before I just continue
try to notice beautiful sky,
- what are you really able to buy?

Quite an insightful question.

[isus]

it might be :)