This is sold

I come here

to look around

and wow...

I see you all.

Although in mist

or some strange smoke

I saw your eyes that

twist and broke.

If I see clear

I'd fall apart,

my rotting heart

can't stand a chance.

And I'm not strong

enough to see

and I'm not dead

but still, I'm free,

so give me love

or strenght to breathe

'cause nothing else

I do not need.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

my rotting heart cant stand a chance. Powerful line .

[Brooke Graco]

Had me thinking :) great work, loved the last stanza.

[Pam]

I LOVE the last paragraph the most. I can definitely relate to this.

[Shirley Wontas]

Heartfelt poem..awesome. I like the last stanza. Great words penned, Isus.. :)

[isus]

im glad you like it :)

[Cassie]

The last stanza, I could never add more. I enjoyed reading.

[isus]

thank you :)

[gabrielle]

sometimes vagueness could actually shield us from harsh realities. but love could give us strength and courage to face adversities.

[isus]

yeah .

[Tam Warink]

Take this love and strength to breathe for nothing else do you need. Nothing else do you need.

[MandaBear]

Very interesting poem. really made me think

[isus]

hope it was worth :)

[Rene Velez]

really nice write, the 1st stanza kinda took me for a loop.

[isus]

glad you like it

[Angel]

We must have nourishing food to live. Love is the nourishing food our hearts must have...

[isus]

i belive it is :D