Lost in the Fire

Lost in the Fire

A Poem by Carlos Lorenzo Estrada
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Hate is a powerful emotion and one that can be very infectious. Any sense of decency or common sense can fall to its pernicious nature.

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Lost in the Fire

By

Carlos Lorenzo Estrada 


I imagine one of the reasons people cling to their hates so stubbornly is because they sense, once hate is gone, they will be forced to deal with pain.- James Baldwin


I burn


No fires


Can claim me


Immolation deserved 


Incinerated vaporous embers 


Inflamed upon societal indifference 


Smoldering ashen pile devoid of my color 


Hatred paints flame in starlight sunsets auburn 


In the cinders grey my oppressors and I are equal tinge


Dust to dust we find commonality in our bigoted destruction 


Do not weep upon the bonfires of our self inflicted annihilation 


For in the ash bares a pestilence of infectious acrimonious rancor 


Let peaceful wind claim us so that our ideologies are lost to history forever 


Only when the last of us is finally consumed by flame will hate be lost in the fire  

© 2021 Carlos Lorenzo Estrada


Author's Note

Carlos Lorenzo Estrada
When I wrote this a few weeks back it was about 95 degrees outside and I was complaining to my muse about the unbearable weather. And she replied, again in a very sensual Cate Blanchett voice, "You don't know what hot is so quit your bitching and write this down." And being her submissive I did exactly as I was told. Because honestly what sane man would ever argue with a woman, especially Cate. Feel free to leave thoughts, comment, or even troll. And thank you to both friend and foe.

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A very powerful piece here about hatred, which seems to be flourishing at this time. I think the philosophy is on the mark. Often, people hate because it allows them to refocus their self hatred. Sadly, I believe as long as self hatred exists, it will project itself outward.

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Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

2 Years Ago

Thank you John for your thoughts that are spot on about this piece. The rise of hatred in our societ.. read more

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Carlos Lorenzo Estrada
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

salinas , CA



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If I can say something worth saying that makes just one person think about others...I'll try. The greatest storyteller was my grandmother. I miss her stories. Also, I would like to add to please pay.. more..

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