All it Took

One kiss
One touch
That's all it took
To feel this lust
To want his touch
Upon my skin
It lingers there.
The was he makes me feel
Oh-I can only describe is as love
The was we moved in sync
As he pushed himself
in and out
in and out
Deeper into my core of lust
Our bodies moving as one
His mouth all over me
Kissing and sucking on my breast.
With every release
I feel my heart swell
With the love I thought
 Couldn't exist for me
This feeling started with just that
One touch
One kiss  

Author's Note

Poetry Book

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

When I see an error in your writing
I assume it is because you are intocicated
by the presence of and sensuous delight
of your lover.
In poetry it is nice to write exactly what
is going on in your body, mind and soul.
Great work.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Philip Smith]

Sounds like you are or at one time very much in love. I feel your joy and pain. Good work

[Steve Ryman]

Look at lines 8 and 10 again. I think written slightly wrongly. Can understand what you meant though and if I ignore that and read it as you meant it then this is again brilliant. So much passion and feeling.

[Strake]

Wow, also really good. Keep it up!