Broken

Getting dumped can be real pain

Broken and bruised
i say goodbye
for life the life we had
has suddenly died
the light was there
but now its dark
like the thing
i thought was your heart.
true i left you
but my reasons where there
we barely talked
you never cared.
we lost the love
we shared so deep.
now its gone
like the words to our song.

Reviews

[Between the grey]

sad write indeed, but nicely written : )

[Eagle Cruagh]

Great writing !

---- Eagle Cruagh

[Steve Ryman]

Sad, touching, beautiful and sincere. Loved it. Absolutely wonderful. Your best yet that I've read!!!!

[Mohamed Hani]

touchy and sad...
nice one