Haiku #21
A Poem by
mattavelli
Senryu
through my dying eyes
I watch the angels come down
wait... those are vultures
© 2021 mattavelli
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Haikus are so meaningful when written right , you have written so beautifully bout how we are so drunk in faith that we believe every bird is an angel , truth is angels are there for people having faiths not drunkards. It d be funny to see the reactions of the people realizing those are nasty vultures 😂
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thanks for reading, Kathy! :)
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Right now it seems like Vultures are overtaking our World; however there are Hosts of Angels that are under the Great Spirit whom is Omnipresent. softly, Pat
Posted 11 Months Ago
Right now it seems like Vultures are overtaking our World; however there are Hosts of Angels that are under the Great Spirit whom is Omnipresent. softly, Pat
Very funny. I was prepared for the wisdom of Heaven to unfold and got Rodney Dangerfield.
Truly fun and entertaining
Posted 2 Years Ago
Very funny. I was prepared for the wisdom of Heaven to unfold and got Rodney Dangerfield.
Truly fun and entertaining
2 Years Ago
Thanks for reading, Cherry! :)
Wow! You have written a powerful Haiku. It's start peaceful, but that ending is dark. Nicely done!
Posted 2 Years Ago
Wow! You have written a powerful Haiku. It's start peaceful, but that ending is dark. Nicely done!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thanks for reading, Karen! :)
2 Years Ago
You're welcome!
This little write was done with a poetic pen! Loved it!
Posted 2 Years Ago
This little write was done with a poetic pen! Loved it!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thanks for reading, Kathy! :)
This is really cute, I enjoyed this Haiku, it is clever
Posted 2 Years Ago
This is really cute, I enjoyed this Haiku, it is clever
Your senryu takes organ donation to a whole new level, Mattavelli! Angels or devils or indeed vultures....who can say? A clever piece of writing. ⚘
Posted 2 Years Ago
Your senryu takes organ donation to a whole new level, Mattavelli! Angels or devils or indeed vultures....who can say? A clever piece of writing. ⚘
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thanks for reading, Jamila! :)
lol, that would be my luck for sure. loved it, too funny. with a twist of morbid fate
Posted 2 Years Ago
lol, that would be my luck for sure. loved it, too funny. with a twist of morbid fate
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thanks for reading, Corset! :)
Finally someone who knows how to write a form write...
this is really good and cute.
Awesome write
Posted 2 Years Ago
Finally someone who knows how to write a form write...
this is really good and cute.
Awesome write
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thanks for reading! :)
WOW. This is great. I am speechless.
Posted 2 Years Ago
WOW. This is great. I am speechless.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thanks for reading! :)
2 Years Ago
You are so VERY welcome! You did such a fantastic job! :)
LOL, you caught me by surprise. :)
Posted 2 Years Ago
LOL, you caught me by surprise. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thanks for reading, JE! :)
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