Evil Gummibears

Evil Gummibears

A Story by Mazie Tackett

Human were becoming endangered. Evil gummibears were taking their revenge out on the human race for eating their children. Lyla and Brooke were on a mission to save the world from the dreaded gummibear army. Growing up in a deserted town, after their father died, they had tp take care of themselves. As adults, they were tough and able to make quick decisions. They decided to hunt down the gummibears. Soon they found they castle, and inside they captured the evil gummibear king. Knowing they would die if their connection with their king was broke, every gummibear rushed to the kings rescue. Prepared Lyla and Brooke had set up a trap to capture them all. They set up a chest and tied the king up inside. The gummibears all rushed inside to get him. When the last one was in Lyla and Brooke closed the door. They turned the key in the lock and walked away forever.

© 2012 Mazie Tackett


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Mazie Tackett
My friend Valerie helped me with this. I thought I'd post this just for kicks. Its amusing to me

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this is funny. Sounds like some crazy kids story X3

Posted 7 Years Ago


hahahaha, I love the theme of this story, very creative and fun to read! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


gummibears.. a sweet story.. could be expanded and there are some grammatical errors..

Posted 7 Years Ago


i am eating gummy bears right no hahah

this was a cute story! make more like this please!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Your story is very refreshing! Yours is the first ever that does not require brain-twisting analysis when it's time to leave feedback, well at least for me. I was glad they didn't burn the castle or else it will no longer fit the children's book category:)

Very simple, but makes readers smile:) The kind of story that is often overlooked.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I'm hungry now... Awesome writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


So this is the beginning of the end. The food becomes the predator. Interesting

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I wonder if humans taste as good to gummibears as they do to us? Hmm...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds as if the Gummi Bear Apocalypse has begun! Gummis eating humans and turning the tables on us...now that's an interesting (and delicious!) concept...

Posted 7 Years Ago


ahah its so cute! it would probably be a really good childrens book! like a picturebook or something! So cute!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Tags: gummibears, endangered, lock, key, king, funny, amusing, laughs, short, story

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