Coastal crimes

Coastal crimes

A Poem by moog-drika
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Hope you get the taste of coastal-scape through these haikus!

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1.
Wave makes a plush sound 
to please subdued seashore, to
abduct solitude. 

2.
Tides are being bribed at 
the slanted sand to falsely
accuse time of theft.

3.
A chunk of offing
invades the cavity of 
seashells to own fate. 

© 2020 moog-drika


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Okay! You've thrown down the gauntlet. Anyone who does haiku after reading this will have to up their game. This is incredibly fresh writing! Thousands write about the sea, but I've never seen it done with so much originality . . . "plush sound" . . . "subdued seashore" . . . "tides bribed" . . . it goes on & on. Ways to describe that scene, which make it a completely different scene than one expects. Also I love it when haikus are clustered. I never get enuf with just one haiku! This is top notch writing! Thanks for a pleasure with my morning coffee (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

3 Months Ago

I really wasn't sure if it will be a fun read but your positive words made me confident about it. Th.. read more



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I choose this writing cause a title. All these 3 haikus are like stages of sensing of sea and coasts. I like how you put human emotions into nature and is resonating with wonder. I can feel all textures and all tastes like I was standing at shore. So well done here.

Posted 3 Months Ago


moog-drika

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I was thinking of requesting you to go through this write since you love beach as.. read more

I am impressed
I am sure glad I took a little deviation from my original coastal path.. Full marks from me and true :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


moog-drika

3 Months Ago

You have no idea how much these words mean to me. So glad to have got full marks :'D thanks a bunch
Neville

3 Months Ago


you are more than welcome my fine literary friend :)
A seascape, of poetic solitude. Thanks for the vacation, in words :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


moog-drika

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for taking a ride. It means a lot.
The title is dope and there is a hypnotic feel through out. I really like it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


moog-drika

3 Months Ago

Thought the write will eradicate my frustrations over not being able to be in beach, but it didn't. .. read more
duff

3 Months Ago

You are very welcome.
Love the title. Writing as I'm reading them. Seems like Godfather.
Haikus? Now the title's more of an introspection.
This one's nice. I haven't been to coasts in a while. I don't think they abduct solitude. They make us feel like a pin in this cardboard.
This one's better, accusing time ammuses me.
So that's why coastal crimes, it's not just about accusations, it's about waters.
I feel grateful we, as a poet, have seas. Waters's always a reflection of reality.
Yes, I could taste them.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

3 Months Ago

I am more of a beach person so it helps me feel happy by abducting solitude. But I get your view as .. read more
I live on an island bereft of sand beaches- we're a rocky tumble down kind of people- and I'm pretty sure the North Atlantic is perpetually pissed off...so this was wonderful for me. The image of a different seascape- a cousin coast. Lovely imagery and a stunning use of haiku structure. Easily my favorite read in days. Thank you for this and I look forward to reading more of your work. Cheers!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

3 Months Ago

I would really like to see North Atlantic getting pissed off. Everything about nature and its mood m.. read more
I like them all, but after deliberations, uhmming and ahhing, number two' theft of time wins in a photo finish.
Maybe it's because of our current predicament of covid stealing so much time from everyone.
Enjoyed them all.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

3 Months Ago

I know! I am longing for nature around us :'(
Staying inside home feels like the time has sto.. read more
Lorry

3 Months Ago

You're welcome.
what is that image? I like it! These are clever and very emotionally evocative! I have had to re read them several times to fully take in the image and feel and the fun thing is how they resonate with each other changing the overall feeling:)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

3 Months Ago

I actually wanted my readers to feel this. So glad you felt that! Thank you so much for your words. .. read more
Robert Trakofler

3 Months Ago

Was asking about The picture? I like the pic! I think I felt the poetic image:)
i felt the waves on my feet as they carved in the sand

Posted 3 Months Ago


moog-drika

3 Months Ago

This is what I wanted. Thanks so much :D
 wordman

3 Months Ago

you`re welcome
Beautiful and interesting poetic haikus....." falsely accuse time of theft." Many people say that time is a thief, but I guess it is what you make of it. Thank you for the lesson.

Posted 3 Months Ago


moog-drika

3 Months Ago

Yes! Thanks so much for pouring your thoughts. Means a lot.
Light and Ashes

3 Months Ago

You're welcome moog-drika!

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