This world is a lie

This world is a lie

And I am living a lie

I dont want to be here

But somehow

Gravity pulls me here

I just want to leave

But somehow

I am pulled back here

Back in the place

Where I started

Reviews

[carl]

so many facets to the world - beauty sorrow joy agony, a lie? a grievous truth? reality or fantasy? perhaps all or none, but it is what we are given and with which we must contend. “The world is what you make of it, friend. If it doesn't fit, you make alterations.” - Stella / Silverado - thanks for the post, makes ya think and that's a good thing. -carl

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for commenting, Carl!

[lightsong]

When You feel lost in this world my friend, remember... You are not alone here :> and the will of living will keep You going.

[Mk.t.g]

Indeed, Lightsong!

[Stella Armour]

you have to take a leap of faith to find freedom ...

[Mk.t.g]

Indeed, Stella!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and where will the place be that we are ended?
I don't know if I want to be around 20 years from now...

I doubt it.

[Mk.t.g]

Indeed! Thanks for reading, Jacob

[Relic]

I feel the same way sometimes. I know that cold days soon turn to hot. In the same way, good days will always return. Or at least, one can hope they will. :)

[Mk.t.g]

Indeed! Thanks for your comment, Relic!

[Pete]

thought provoking. we may be in this world but need not be of it. as Jim Morrison sang in The Doors song Riders on the Storm -

Into this house, we're born
Into this world, we're thrown

[Mk.t.g]

Rightly said by Jim Morrison! Thanks for reviewing, Pete!

[Pete]

my pleasure ... :)

[willweb]

Sometimes it certainly does feel that way but there are days when truth is all I can find. Nicely expressed my friend.

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for reviewing, Willweb!

[andrew mitchell]

Live the lie or make a difference. We are all stuck here and until time let’s us go or we fall to another man’s gain, we are here to stay for better or worse.we are left with choices that’s all.

[Mk.t.g]

Indeed! Thanks for your comment, Andrew!