I want __________

I got inspiration from a picture! I hope you like it :P Love or hate??

I want to love you

I want to see your face everyday

I want to your face to be the last thing I see 

I want to kiss your lips with all my might

I want to be there for you whenever you need me

I want to be make you laugh all the time

I want to put strawberries in your mouth 

I want to say I love you everyday to you

I want to touch every part of you 

Before I go anywhere, I want you to kiss me every time

I want to come home to your smiling face

I want to hear your voice as often as I can

I  want to make sure your well taken care of

I want to see you in the shower

I want to dream of you 

I want to cuddle with you while we watch t.v.

I want you to be the only one next to me forever

I want You.

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Wasnt really feeling the repetive nature of this piece. But it was a good read, sweet and loving. Keep writing! Nicely done.

[Cassie Fraga]

aaaawwww... that was a sweet read!!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

how cute!

[Lily Mae]

I really like the style and the I wants...well I've had a case of that a time or two.. ;) xo

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Cute! I liked it!

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Nice poem that takes anaphora's figure of speech to its limits and beyond.
I want you-, which is the essence of the poem and shown explicitely only in the last verse is hidden, but present, in every verse. This experiment is not original, i've already read someone trying it somewhere, but it keeps its beauty due to the fact the topic is very personal, everyone focus on different things they want about their lover before saying the last verse (i want you).
Great job, great piece

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice! I love it. I know the feeling :)