There is a God

There is a God

A Poem by LunarSong

There is a God in the heavens
Who watches over me.
There is a God in the heavens
Who I just cannot see.

There's a Redeemer of the world
Who gave his life for me.
There's a Redeemer of the world
Who bled to make man free.

There's a Comforter in men's hearts
Who whispers peace to me.
There's a Comforter in men's hearts
Who swells up like a tree.

There is I, a faithful servant
Who tries to make it known.
There is I, a faithful servant
Who believes what God's shown.

© 2015 LunarSong


Author's Note

LunarSong
The last stanza is for all those who have worked and are working tirelessly to further God's work. :) Hope you like it.

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The four points of the cross structured cleverly in what seems like a hymn. Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


LunarSong

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I think it was slightly inspired by a song. I wish I could write music well to add to thi.. read more
YES!! Really thought this was amazing. I love works like this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


LunarSong

2 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Although I'm not religious, I see and appreciate the strength of your faith that this work shows. There is an element of uncertainty in the first verse, which leads to the rest of the poem in a rush of newfound confidence and the entire piece ends with the feeling of triumph.

The simple, repeating rhyme scheme seems almost out of place, yet really brings this all together and lets it stick with one in ways that a more complicated choice wouldn't.

10/10!

Posted 2 Years Ago


LunarSong

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I am really glad that you liked it. I love your take on it, thank you.
I really like it. Felt lyrical, like, a church song or something. Very good!

Posted 3 Years Ago


LunarSong

3 Years Ago

Thank you. I wish I could write music and I probably would turn it into a song.
I love the love you feel for God. This felt very lyrical. Ever thought of putting it into a song of worship? I always try to see if I can sing the poems I have written. This one would be a good one to sing. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Thank you. And yes, I have thought of it before, unfortunately I'm not skilled at making up my own m.. read more
Indeed, there is nothing more rewarding than to "to further God's work" as you put it. Refreshing and positive poem..filled me with warmth..well done

Posted 4 Years Ago


LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Thank you :) There really isn't anything more rewarding.
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This is a good poem about faith.

Posted 4 Years Ago


LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Amen! PTL and yes yes yes there is a God and he is Awesome!
All glory and honor belongs to God!

Posted 4 Years Ago


LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading this. :) Yes. Glory to him for forever. :)
I like it, really nice. But in the last line, it makes more sense to me to say God has instead of God's. But I like that repeating! It's a nice touch!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Farrsight

4 Years Ago

But without my suggestion, it only has 6!
Farrsight

4 Years Ago

But, without my suggestion, it only has 6! With my suggestion, it has 7.
Farrsight

4 Years Ago

Sorry. I didn't mean to do it twice.
I love this poem. It has a nice flow and it is a wonderful commentary on things spoke of and revealed in the Bible. I appreciate you expressing your devotion to God and your belief in God through your writing. I love the transition into explaining how the Holy Spirit makes you feel. That He makes you feel at peace. The Trinity was well displayed in your first three stanzas. Do you go to church? Do you have a particular denomination? But awesome work. God bless you my friend!

Posted 4 Years Ago


LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your interest in my writing, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I go to church, I belong to.. read more
Stephen

4 Years Ago

No problem

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