Sexting and Cyber bullies

Pictures of her
sent to a boy.
she believed it was love
but it lead to no joy.

He shared with his friends
The photos at school.
Soon they were viral.
She felt like a fool.

She checks her facebook
just to find smut.
What used to be friends
now call her a s**t.

She goes to her room
and cries herself dry.
She has this feeling
of wanting to die.

She drowns herself
with a bottle of pills.
she is sad, she is hurt.
In her lungs water fills.

Sexting is wrong.
cyberbullying too.
Watch what you post.
Watch what you do.

Reviews

[SuicidePact.]

this is something that way too many young teenagers are facing!

this poem should be shared on every website in every teen magazine!!

but it isn't always the guy whos the dick and sending them around..my ex best friend...yes the same one who i wrote my poems about... :/ she was and is the biggest guy in the fact that she does this to guys!! she gets them to send her photos of whats in their pants then shows everyone and they all start mocking the guys on size! i think she deserves a smack on the face so should every guy or girl who has ever done such a thing!!!!!!!! what gives them the right to expose someone elses privacy??

[Bats In The Belfry]

Good job on shedding light on an important subject. Well written!

[Destiny Crawford]

Loved it :)

[ba_mcfarlane]

Sometimes, the now of social contact, it intensifies the vulnerability of a young heart. Well approached, well felt, well written.

[Legion]

True.

[Southern Cross]

Great poem..not only for the message and insight but it's form and easy flow

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

High emotion and guided sense of reading, well done, good read.

[The White Wolf]

It is a real tragic world we live in these days. First rule of thumb, if you don't want everyone in the world to know, don't put it on the computer. A lot of people get really abused by cyberbullies, especially girls. Be careful out there. There are a lot of creepers on the internet. Cherish yourself enough to not seek love from faceless pervs hiding behind a curtain online.
WELL DONE!!

[Siren]

very pointed and heartfelt, SP. great write.

[Jock Engelman]

btw i have just shared it to my facebook mates, cause i thought it was just that brilliant and one of the comments made was this:
"Bell Fraser: relatable. i like it. she's simple and direct, but her writing has a nice beat to it which just keeps you reading"

[M]

The story in the poem is great and really tells the tale of what happens in a very chronological and poignant fashion. My one suggestion is to rethink some of the lines for awkward phrasing, which happens on occasion when you're trying to force the rhyme scheme. The prime example in this poem, I think, is "In her lungs water fills". It's an awkward construction there to rhyme the line with pills.