My friends girlfriend.

something that happened years ago. i just remembered it and worded it. not my best but hey!

Her eyes,

The look I instil.

Freezing me in my stride

But warming me up with her comfortable gaze.

We talked, we walked,

She cried, I implied,

 

“I’m here my dear, suck up those useless tears”

 

Her past haunts her. Taunts her.

I want to heal her but lord knows that’s not an option.

At arms length I will forever be.

Pushed away by the guilt.

Her past is her present, my future is non existent.

Her past is my present, a familiar presence.

I lust simply because I can’t have.

Her beauty caught in his manipulation.

Is there justice in that? is there? 

Reviews

[Celestial Witch Child]

Love the idea of this... It is very intriguing.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awesome dude. Loved it.

[nigrum homonculus]

glad you did bro

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yep!

[kayla]

I like this. It's really good(:

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks a bunch!

[Brittany]

Her past is her present, my future is non existent.

Her past is my present, a familiar presence.

This lines really struck me as beautifully written. I don't know, just like the words and message conveyed. There is no justice in love. Nice job.

[nigrum homonculus]

there really isn't. thank you for reading paige. glad you enjoyed it.

[Wild Willow Blue]

I like this, nice work. I love the way in which you use your words. Lovely.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! really appreciate that

[Brown Bull]

Science would tell us that we are given eyes to see... sadly many of us leave this Earth not knowing what a woman's eyes are really for, but you seem to have already found out.

[nigrum homonculus]

i'm not sure i get you there.

[That_Girl]

Think he's talking about girls only wanting the toxic relationships but I could be wrong....

[nigrum homonculus]

ooh right, yeah. he is right.

[Brown Bull]

No, I'm talking about her eyes... have you ever seen a cow's beautiful brown eyes? They could make the toughest bull melt.

[nigrum homonculus]

i've seen a cows brown eyes and it looked like it was going to eat me O.o i guess bulls are into that stuff.

[That_Girl]

LOL kinky....

[That_Girl]

Well spoken... tough situation to be in. :/

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

WoW! this was great like i can understand this like for my friends and like a guy dating a girl but anyways this was great! the Emotion was GREAT!!!

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! glad you enjoyed it

[♥ Lexii Boo ♥]

no problem