Ancient Warrior

Ancient Warrior

A Poem by Poetic Beauty



Whispers swirls

Within midnight air

A bite stings my face

 

Icy fingers of death

Stroke pale soft cheeks

A shallow grave

Gives no peace

 

The shadow dances

Lurking in the beyond

Slightly visible

With a misty form

The vanishes, gone

 

Ancient stones

From a tragic time

Mark the spot

Of a warriors decline

 

No fancy marker

Or grand statue

Stands

Only dirt and rocks

Cover this man

 

Earth once covered

With crimson blood

Where wild flowers

Decorate the

Forgotten flood

 

This specter

Dances between

The past and present

Waiting for the girl

With eyes shaped

Like a crescent 

© 2011 Poetic Beauty


Author's Note

Poetic Beauty
Artwork by david howard Johnson

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This piece has a nice rhythm to it, and the words only add to the beauty of the painting. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words add so much meaning to the image

Posted 12 Years Ago


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beautiful poem that captures the magic in that picture

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazing artwork and poetry. I like the description and the story in the words.
"No fancy marker
Or grand statue
Stands
Only dirt and rocks
Cover this man"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hauntingly beautiful story...........

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great vivid story telling, love the imagery!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent, poised and almost reminisent of the story 300! well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent job on this poem. The wording and the imagery is awesome!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like the story in this, has a nice mystery to it. A very enjoyable poem to read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..

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