Kids In Summer

                     "Kids In Summer ☀☂"


During hot summer days,
When sun blaze bright,
Child plays flying kite.

                  Playing in scorching sun,
                  Holiday time fun starts,
                 They run chasing carts.

                                     No classes to attend,
                                    Summer tents extend high,
                                    Exams end, fears fly.

                  They love catching fish,
                  Their prayers wish small
                  Tiny fish for all!

Returning home at sunset,
Waiting to let in,
With wet dirty skin.












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AWARDS/ BADGES WON:

Winner

May 20, 2010

• Any Poem
• Kids In Summer

 

 

Bronze Summer!!!!

Feb 19, 2011

• Summer!!
• Kids In Summer


 

Reviews

[James Johnson]

this is a cool poem. i really like it :)

[Taylor H.]

love this. I thought it was adorable :)

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

This is my first reading of this form of poetry. For the format, it is well done. I think in your explanation of the form...you mean to say four WORDS, not four SYLLABLES. One may be confused. Overall, nice write.

~True

[Dev]

So I haven't heard of this form of poetry before and deem myself not the right person for a review. It's a nice write. I have some things I'd like to point out, but I don't know if it's because of the syllables or something else
eg.
Summer tents extends high, (summer tents extend high)
Exams ends, fears fly. (Exams end)
They love catching fishes (fish)