I See My Heart in Your eyes

A love poem

Your lips melt into

my skin

because our dreams

breathe precious rhymes

that we only hear,

and that's when I saw

my heart in your eyes.

Somewhere in the depth

of your soul

I found silent love,

and desire

holding us together

where our bodies surrender.

I smell your scent 

that caresses my thoughts

as words find 

the softest part

of your touch.

We find ourselves

while time

drifts slowly

across our passion,

and another love story 

is printed within 

sultry dreams

where I see

my heart in

your eyes.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

The eyes are the windows of the soul. Silent love makes me think about illicit love affairs, where the joy of love can't be shared. This poem is beautifully expressed.

Chris

[KAREN]

Thanks for the read and review!

[heavenscentgirl1]

A very Impressive AND HEARTFELT WRITE. I’VE JUST RECENTLY BECAME INSPIRED TO TRY TO WRITE AGAIN AND MAY BE POSTING SOMETHING SOON WHICH IIS. BY COINCIDENCE ALONG THE SAME THEME AS YOURS!. KEEP WRITING. HSG 😇

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[heavenscentgirl1]

MY. PLEASURE 👍😇

[Susan 🦋]

Sounds to me like you found your soul mate. :-) Wonderfully written, beautifully expressed... " Silent Love"...perfect.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Neville]

well penned my friend, enjoyed no end ............................... N :)

[KAREN]

Thank you1

[John Carver]

Is this true or part of that so called love of our day which is adultery until and only if the former one takes you back or joins you in adultery with yet another leading to the exponential sin we have nowadays? Go back to him after your next one or pray he also commits adultery, a curse only Jesus can forgive for he died for their sins. But going from one to another all the time leaves you sticky. When the paste dies they are left like the pillar that Lot''s wife became and we all know where that led. It let to incest and a people born out of wedlock into and from incest. I'm sorry but your poem made me sad in the light of the spirit of earth as they all go back to dust and ashes. Only dust.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Sir Robert Robbie Lord ..]

A slow century it took me to read each fine line here is all swell is all awesome I do almost certainly love your poems every bit good

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Miss Sharon]

Now THIS is what good poetry is all about! I love it. ~Sharon

[KAREN]

Wow! Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

Man! You sure got love down to a magical potion and worthy science. Every sentence is soft, tender and touching.

[KAREN]

Thank a lot!

[M. J. Smith]

Whoever this was for is lucky indeed. Very beautiful thoughts.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Soren]

Sensual and romantic. A sense of drifting off into passion and a sense of obsession. Well done.

[KAREN]

Thank you!