We are the Insane

We are the Insane

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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collaboration with abbie.  yall should read her stuff its great. comments appreciated

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
Known far and wide
to show our krazy side

You give us weird looks
because of our actions and words

We think your nerds
and just boring turds

Many call us unstable
ever since we left the cradle

From the second that you meet us
you'll wish us hit by a bus

From the land we are native
we are called 'mentally creative'

If you ever take astray
you won't last a day

Were nowhere near tame
we are the mentally insane

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High five on that notion XD most people are pretty insane!
(including me n chloe...) yay for the hypo loonatics!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

10 Years Ago

Thanks :D
I like this... describes me to a tee... JK but I do like this one :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

10 Years Ago

Lol thank you
this is amazing it reminds me of my group of friends at school, crazy and proud:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

10 Years Ago

Thank you
marie

10 Years Ago

no prob it was great ˆ-ˆ
Haha, very well put together, pretty great rhyming, an all around funny yet awesome poem :P
Great job 100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

10 Years Ago

Thanks
great collaboration, and the rhyming was amazing, good job my friend

Posted 10 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

10 Years Ago

Thanks
great collab!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Awsome, as I said on abbie's perfect colaberation, and I love the writting! it is amazing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

10 Years Ago

Thanks
Dominique

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Literally, perfect description of me and my friend Haley, we are twins separated at birth, oh and we're both, in the words of others "f***ing crazy" and "mental" and then we both maniacally cackle. I loooooooved this, I grinned as I read it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

10 Years Ago

Thank you
RachelReaper

10 Years Ago

of course, buddy
you could the out the word ever, in , ever since we left the cradle, it ruins the rhythm.
Great, I see what you are saying, but the rhythm gets a little messed up and sketchy in some places.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the input ^_^
Lol, I can totally relate to the poem in so many ways XD! Amazing job, it totally made my day! :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

10 Years Ago

Thanks

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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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