We are the Insane

collaboration with abbie.  yall should read her stuff its great. comments appreciated

Author's Note

Known far and wide
to show our krazy side

You give us weird looks
because of our actions and words

We think your nerds
and just boring turds

Many call us unstable
ever since we left the cradle

From the second that you meet us
you'll wish us hit by a bus

From the land we are native
we are called 'mentally creative'

If you ever take astray
you won't last a day

Were nowhere near tame
we are the mentally insane

Reviews

[♪Barklight♪]

High five on that notion XD most people are pretty insane!
(including me n chloe...) yay for the hypo loonatics!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks :D

[Lane Craver]

I like this... describes me to a tee... JK but I do like this one :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol thank you

[marie]

this is amazing it reminds me of my group of friends at school, crazy and proud:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[marie]

no prob it was great ˆ-ˆ

[LittleLover]

Haha, very well put together, pretty great rhyming, an all around funny yet awesome poem :P
Great job 100/100

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[deepblue04]

great collaboration, and the rhyming was amazing, good job my friend

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[captain]

great collab!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you!

[Dominique]

Awsome, as I said on abbie's perfect colaberation, and I love the writting! it is amazing :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Dominique]

You're welcome.

[RachelReaper]

Literally, perfect description of me and my friend Haley, we are twins separated at birth, oh and we're both, in the words of others "f***ing crazy" and "mental" and then we both maniacally cackle. I loooooooved this, I grinned as I read it.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[RachelReaper]

of course, buddy

[Calibaster]

you could the out the word ever, in , ever since we left the cradle, it ruins the rhythm.
Great, I see what you are saying, but the rhythm gets a little messed up and sketchy in some places.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks for the input ^_^

[Crimson Bayonet]

Lol, I can totally relate to the poem in so many ways XD! Amazing job, it totally made my day! :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks