single doses

the main quote in the excessivenes of human nature...

 

Everything in Excess is poisonous

addiction starts off in single doses

until completely indulging…

Author's Note

i guess this will be main point of the mini booklet of mine...
here is a link: Excessiveness of Human Nature
hope you like it..

I may be wrong or not...it depends on how you understand...

Reviews

[Mia]

I completely agree with you! However, addiction is not always a bad thing. I’m addicted to love…I have to have it, all the time and I have to give it all the time. Addiction has such a negative connotation and it’s understandable. Many people have suffered as a result of some addiction. I refuse to see it as a negative, the only addiction I want in my life is the good kind :D
Thanks for sharing my friend.

[Pax]

i guess this poem i give 'addiction' a negative connotation because it is indeed dark for me in terms of addicting things... for i believe everything comes in moderate dosage.. too much is getting greedy...but it terms of love like you say..I believed it is also moderate for i think something you two both love, something you two both share, you give and take, both give space, there is trust...love isn't selfish, love isn't greedy... love gives way even you end up hurting... if your addicted to love is it something that you want all the love you can get...is that greedy or i just think it is....its just my thoughts my friend...I'm not sure i answered your question...
thanks again for a thought-provoking response...

[Pax]

now i got your point my friend Mia...thanks to Mr. James review...

[Mia]

I value your opinions my friend and even if they are not the same as mine, please, do not hesitate to share them. That's what makes life o interesting. Thank you for trying to see my point and thank you for sharing yours. You're very welcome :D

[Pax]

thanks my dearest friend, yes i was a bit worried at first because I'm always careful not to offend anyone...

I really got your poit my friend, but then again... the heart know the bouderies of its love...the heart knows how to balance between things it love...like i said to aleysha below...there is a fine balance between things that we need...in which moderations comes along...

thanks again for listening...

[Pax]

typo again *point*

[Mia]

I see what you're saying and reading Caradoc's review made me see your perspective better. Too much of a good thing can indeed make you take that thing for granted. You are welcome :) this has given me a lot to think about and for that I thank you :D

[Rain]

Totally agree. It sounds trite, but moderation is always best. Over indulgence is the down fall of many, including myself. Short, but very meaningful.

[Pax]

I'm really glad you've enjoyed my poems....mr. Rain...it brings so much pleasure...I'm not sure it can be a poem but it is definitely a quote..

[Pax]

:) i appreciate your reviews so much mr. Rain...it bring pleasure fuel to write more....thank you...

[Heather]

I have to say that I completely agree with you in what you are expressing here. We are an addictive society, needing more and more and can't see that our indulging smothering. WELL DONE

[Pax]

thanks you so much my friend...

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I really like this poem of yours, Pax! I do totally agree with you. We actually talked about binge drinking and addictions last week in Drivers' Ed. I think it's a bad thing and if you don't start drinking then you don't have a problem to worry about period. Right? I know some fellow classmates or even children younger than me that drinks or does harmful stuff to their bodies. I wonder and wonder what kind of world have we come to? A horrible one at that! I read the reviews and comments below before reviewing myself. I do think "love" itself can be a bad addiction sometimes, too! Yeah there's such thing as "good" kind of love addiction. But that's hard to find. Some people get so stuck in their own world of love with their girlfriend/boyfriend and forget the most important people in their life. Thank you for sharing such a powerful poem, Pax!! :D

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Pax]

thanks for a another in-depth review my friend... indeed your right...yet the key to everything is moderation... yes drinking alcoholic is harmful if indulge daily...it good to drink it once in a while...and when you talk about the harmful stuff well...i could say don't try it if you can't handle...because addiction eats your soul... yes...when you talk about love..its has two faces...so i think your right...thanks u so much again...

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome, truly. Your writing deserves bunches of meaningful reviews, Pax! :)

[Renée]

Agreed ! That is going to be a very long book if you are covering human nature lol

[Pax]

hahaha....lol..i agree... there are too much to cover...some i don't know yet....thank you my friend...

[B-poet]

Very true indeed. Short, sweet, and to the point. You've mastered this style of poetic diction very well. Great write. :)

[Pax]

thank you my friend... its such a pleasure to hear your thoughts about it...

[Corset]

oh..I dunno Paxie (lol, sorry I couldn't resist ) can one have too many Cheetos? yes? oh bummer, I suppose this can be true and definitely true with addictive substances

[Pax]

lol....you remember the name....hahaha...no probs...so made me ..*smiles*... oh i would love some cheetos... yet we know to well too much junk foods is not too good for the health... moderation is the key... ;)
thanks my friend..

[captain]

deep and direct to the point. Great quote!!!

[Pax]

thanks Cap...

[khalid]

so short but directly to the point. i have really enjoyed it..

[Pax]

thank you Khalid....

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Beautifully done :)

[Pax]

thank you mr. Cord...

[Belle]

Hm I remember the first line. :P
Another good one from you! :)

[Pax]

;) now you remind me of something....thank you ms. Belle