You Touch Me

I touched you,

last night .

your skin so soft,

as i caressed your soul.

Your lips

wet,and sweet,

when we`re together,

i feel complete.

You touch me,

i explode inside,

my feelings for you,

i could never hide.

I touched you,

last night.

and you,

you touched me...

Reviews

[...]

Very tender feels like this could go much deeper. a great read none the less. Cheers Starz

[wordman]

thank you for the review ! i appreciate it

[Bo Lanier]

wow! wonderful write, loved it. it has a sexual overtone to it.

[wordman]

thank you bo !

[barleygirl]

Your poem seems to only scratch the surface in a shy, tender, reserved way. Your message is well-expressed, but it's just that I sense there's so much more beneath the surface that you're not revealing. Being the type to dig down, I find myself wanting to know more . . . more details about this situation that can bring it into better clarity. This would make your message even more original, I think.

[wordman]

thank you ! just didn`t get deep enough i guess

[Paul Bell]

Great build up ending in the gentle feelings of love. Brill.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Lorry]

Love the image this projects onto my mind, of two people at their core, merely hearts and souls connecting, intertwined in a universe of only their being, where everything is slowed to just that one thought of sharing being. Love it.

[wordman]

beautiful description,thank you

[SCRIBBLER]

what a great write Wordman

[wordman]

thank you scribbler,good to see you.

[SCRIBBLER]

good to be back on

[SCRIBBLER]

was really busy

[wordman]

well,lets see some poetry my friend,i have a new one up

[SCRIBBLER]

one in progress

[SCRIBBLER]

hope to put it on soon

[wordman]

looking forward to it !

[redzone]

I see with the first poem I am commenting you are a romantic at heart Ron... a very "touching" poem Ron.. sorry couldn't resist the semi pun... ;0)

redzone

[wordman]

thank you for reading,yes i seem to hang on love poetry

[Ice Penada]

Short and gentle yet so sweet.

[wordman]

thank you ! can`t get off these 4 stanzas

[Ruth]

Beautiful, the simple emotion of romance, nicely done wordman :) Gentle and graceful...

[wordman]

poppy,thank you for stopping by...

[Ruth]

My pleasure hon :)