Pain

Pain.   

    "It's insane how emotional pain can be so immense that you'd physically feel it. I can feel my heart split open, I can feel the emptiness inside of my chest, I can feel my brain collapsing, I can feel my heart struggling to stay alive, I can feel pain in every fiber of my broken body, and I can feel my nerve impulses that are like electric jolts under my soft skin, I feel pain in every ounce of my fragile self. Pain has engulfed me long ago, I tried to get used to it thinking it would fade and my thoughts were correct. Pain fades. Pain vanishes. It might not seem like it but it will. People whom have caused you pain will eventually die from your heart, they will crumble and you'll be able to blow them away like ashes. It's just a matter of time, because time heals. Tears will be stitches to your torn up heart, every stitch will kill like a burning needle, but I promise you one day you'll wake up in the morning with dried tears on your cheek, and you will look in the mirror and see that darkness has controlled your eyes, it is not darkness of pain; that darkness will be strength." 

Reviews

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Tears will be stitches to your torn up heart, yes! this is beautiful and I love how it breaks away the pain and doesnt bast in it, very lovely, glad to meet your acquaintance madam

[Abeer Tarek]

Thank you very much for your reviews sir!

[Sandra Nair]

Yes, Abeer. Physical pain can be cured by doctors. But emotional pain will create in us a lot of traumas.
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[??????]

Wow I really loved this!!!! It may be wrote as a story but I felt it as a poem speaking very deeply:) Way to go. Pen on:)

[Abeer Tarek]

Yeah I didn't really know what to tittle this..most my writings are something between a poem and a story! but yeah thank you so much

[??????]

Your very welcome:)

[Aman samrat khare (ASK)]

Has an intense meaning to it excellent writing

[Abeer Tarek]

Thank you very much!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very deep and very moving, such depth and meaning behind every word. '
Your writing is very inspiring and sends out such a message.
Such a heartfelt emotional read.
Really enjoyed it.
Keep writing :)

[Abeer Tarek]

thank you very much that means a lot!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your more than welcome :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Everything is temporary & will vanish at one point of time or the other. You have given a great message to the readers. Again a fine piece of work with the beauty of your worlds. Incredible!

[Abeer Tarek]

Again thank you very much!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You're most welcome again :)

[Moody]

People tend to think emotional pain isn't as damaging and hard to deal with as physical pain. This describes perfectly the inner turmoil of an emotionally suffering person. I love it.

[Abeer Tarek]

Thank you very much for your support :)

[David Scott]

I remember when I realized emotions are physical... They just are so much a part of our truth we cannot separate them from our being. Our mind is physical. Our thoughts can actually change the shape of our faces and our posture. The key is to learn to choose your state of mind and filter these emotions toward an empowering meaning... This is big stuff and strong truth.

[Abeer Tarek]

Absolutely! Thanks for your comment :)

[faked.reality]

I really liked the last line about how the darkness won't be pain but strength. That has a deep meaning for me and I'm sure it does for a lot of other people. I really like your writings because they are all so relative. So thanks! (:

[Abeer Tarek]

No thank you for your support! Your comments mean so much to me and I hope I never disappoint you guys!

[faked.reality]

I seriously doubt you ever could (: