A mothers passing

A mothers passing

A Poem by Gee
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For all those that have lost their mother

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Wash every face with mournful tears
let solemn silence fill all ears,
have time stand still to mark the day
a mother died, passed away.

Draw a veil across the sun
inform the birds no song be sung,
bow down all heads in silent prayer
for she is gone, no longer there.

Let choirs of angels sing their love
and carry high her soul above,
then cherubs tend and for her care
until the time to join her there.

Dry every face of mournful tears
may celebration fill all ears,
remove the world from mute and pause
each broken heart beat out applause.

Unveil the sun tell all birds sing
rejoice in what all mothers bring,
a love unbounded true and deep
eternally in each heart to keep.


© 2018 Gee



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"let solemn silence fill all ears, .." - class image here - absolute nothingness filling the voids - very apt for this write.

i like the way the whole write swings around this fulcrum
"Let choirs of angels sing their love,
and carry high her soul above,
then cherubs tend and for her care,
until the time to join her there. " - as a fulcrum its quite stunning and clever word arranging too.

The fourth stanza reminded me of the New Orleans style funerals with the jazz bands accompanying - a fine celebratory verse - of a life well lived.
The end stanza brings us back to serene poignancy and allows the reader to carry on but with a new memory in our hearts forever.
Its a very well penned memorial Gee. Really... sound as...
:))


Posted 3 Years Ago


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Gee

3 Years Ago

Thanks Anto,nice to get your seal of approval,B...............



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MCS
So beautiful in all its sadness.

It's a sorrow one never gets over.



Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you..
This was written beautifully and took a nice journey. I loved how it was rounded out at the end, making me smile.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you..
I know that certain lines and certain poems will speak to people differently. For me, I loved the line "Draw a veil across the sun." The passing of a loved one really does diminish the light in the soul and only with time is the sun again unveiled. This is a beautiful tribute to your mother, to the love you have for her, your mourning, and moving on. She must be proud looking on.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words
The ultimate poem for your Mum, Gee.
She would be proud of it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thanks zpaul
Gee

1 Year Ago

Who the frig is zpaul...
Paul Bell

1 Year Ago

That's my Zambian name. lol
A beautiful and a sad poem dear Gee.
"Draw a veil across the sun,
inform the birds no song be sung,
bow down all heads in silent prayer,
for she is gone,no longer there. "
I understand the above lines. Some people are the softness in our life that can't be replaced. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome my friend.
This is just beautiful! I remember my mom who passed away years ago. A touching and heartbreaking poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you..
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Taz
I love the passion and strength in this piece. It was amazingly portraying the visualuzation of what happenes when a true mother passes on. I also really loved the flow of it, It added to the intensidy and mood. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you Taz
Taz

1 Year Ago

You're welcome.
There are something that you can only say this is lovely and leave it at that.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Cheers Ken. Written in a rare sensible moment
As i kept reading , i started imagining the visuals musically, how touching this is , how deep is the love and affection. Thank you once again , showering us with words that makes us fall in love with your writings. cheers.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jayanth
This is truely beautiful. 'unveil the sun' is a really cool sound and image.

It always got to me though how when a loved one dies everything somehow just carries on as usual in the world

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you. Actually written when my old mum was seriously ill and on the brink of popping her dodder.. read more

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Added on March 2, 2015
Last Updated on March 27, 2018
Tags: Love, death, mother, angels, cherubs

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Gee
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Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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