Take me to you...

I hope
You do remember
As it haven't been too long
To this sweet relation of ours
When me standing by the window
And staring at your beautiful face
Why are you so much far and distant
When I wanna have you on my hand
Well I wish someone would bring you
Right onto my palm...
You know how special you are to me
But I am waiting for the one
Who will pluck you from above
And gift me....
Me closing my eyes,
And dreaming of Mr. Charming
It's silly I know
But he's somewhere in this world...
I wait for the day
He'll come with you in his hand
And gift me you...

Author's Note

guess about whom...
it's the bright star shining above me....

Reviews

[Ashish]

It's very cute,
a sweet and cute girl's dream..
of course I know "whom"
It's the prince charming for whom the princess is waiting...

I hope, that the day is about to come very soon... :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

haha... hope the same...
and thank u AB...

[Adam Adams]

that's nice...
very softly written. every chick has got her dreams to get tagged with her lover of life who's so capable & righteous to take her to... everywhere around the world or beyond horizons wherever she wishes goin' so far alongwith him. that's really a very captivating and... sweet-reading poetry that you get yourself licked in so well. great job!

[Anindita Janhabee]

you got it right!!!
thank you Adam.... : )

[D]

Umm... Either tthe sun, or the moon. no lines standing out to specify which one, I'm guessing it's the moon.

and the feelings of longing ..I like it. well penned.

[Anindita Janhabee]

sorry my dear...it's the star......
and thanks a lot once again...glad to have u on my page at least....

[D]

you stated "a star " meaning it's only one star. my pleasure.

[D]

correction * the star

[Anindita Janhabee]

yep...only one can stay in heart right...

[D]

oh I see :) right.