Lives Entwined...

Love to death.

“Are you ready?” He asked. His tone was quivery and his eyes were red.

“With you, I always am.” I was confident.

“Then……. Let’s finish it. Together” He suggested, his eyes trying his best to avoid contact with mine.

“Wait…. Wait for a few more seconds.” I paced towards him.

Standing close to him, I felt that my decision was unquestionable.

I was right.

We were right.

He leaned closer and our lips made way for our last kiss.

We had no other choice.

Our hands caught hold of the cups of wine.

The cups of poison.

The cups of Death.

Hands entwined, we took one quick gulp.

Everything went black as we breathed our last in this loveless world.

Author's Note

World is becoming Loveless.
No freedom to live as we desire.
Monopoly of Majority dominates The World.

Reviews

[Ethan]

Ooo good job. I like this a lot.

[Zephyr]

Thank you Ethan:)

[pia]

i would have loved to read more !!! this was so well worded. good job

[Zephyr]

I am glad Pia:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Tragic end..short one but very good..amazing

[Zephyr]

Thank you Farhan:)

[Mr.Writer]

The ending made me shiver...
My Neetha...
Wow! I can definitely say that it made me speechless...
Amazing, keep it up...

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much Shaan:)

[wordman]

such a tragic end to a lovely love story,

[Zephyr]

Thank you Wordman:)

[Joey Nizz]

This story was suspension and beautiful in its own way, I loved the characters and how they were in this writing.

Thanks for sharing, this was a pleasant read :)

[Zephyr]

Always a pleasure Joey:)

[Jacob Clifford]

The suspense was done very well. The first few lines got my attention and held it until the end. If you have to go out, what better way than with someone you love?

[Zephyr]

I agree Clifford!
Thanks for the warm Review;)

[Rubein Geterminah]

Poeples tend to answer the awkward questions and situations of life; not until we have the right atmospheres to do so. Some do get bored and and want to end it by commit ting suicide. This is seen in the story by the characters.

[Zephyr]

Yes it is!
Thank you so much Rubein:)

[Najam Us Saher]

I agree with you the world has really become loveless and the people are doubting each other and there is lots of misery everywhere and lack of trust too.... nice work..I loved it..

[Zephyr]

Always a pleasure Najam:)

[Richard simpson]

love the beautiful message it holds in it's powers of keeping the reader tied down to the story and plot of the poetic essence it has shown. It's a lovely work and I love it a lot. Great work!

[Zephyr]

I am glad to read your words Richard!
Thank you so much;)