The Beautiful Song

The Beautiful Song

A Poem by Silmara McGarry



               Look at me while I sing the beautiful song
               Tell me that without me you can’t move on
                     Stay with me under the warm sun,
                let the rays of light show you a new dawn.
                      Lay with me under the starry sky,
         and don’t you ever forget that you will always be mine.
                         Be my knight for all my life, 
                  sharing with me unforgettable delights.
                       Soon I will be your lady in white,
           forever singing to you, the beautiful song of our lives.

© 2017 Silmara McGarry



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I like the way this series of observations also tells a story. A glimpse into the future ("soon I will be your lady in white") is what makes this message more meaningful than just expressing feelings with nicely crafted references to sun, dawn, starry sky, & delights. This glimpse shows me why the narrator is literally singing with happiness.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Helooo... and sorry, I don't know how I did not see your review before :-)
Thanks indeed for .. read more
barleygirl

8 Months Ago

No worries . . . I've been off on a tangent myself (((HUGS)))
Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

:-)!!! Hugssss



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Lovely. A very romantic & faithful lullaby you sing to your lovers... allowing his heart to be yours, letting yours be his. Beautifully written!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Months Ago

Many thanks indeed for taking the time to read and such wonderful review, Adams ;-)
It was a pleasure to read this poem. Another one to add in my favourites :)

Lyla

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

5 Months Ago

Hey Lyla :-) That is so kind of you...Many thanks indeed dear!!!

See you,
;-)<.. read more
How your words seem to prepare the soul for your blessed union with your beloved knight. And yes, loving and living as one should create the most beautiful music the world has ever known.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Or "her" blessed union with her beloved knight :-)
Wonderful review and words, thank you so m.. read more
An owl on the moon

8 Months Ago

Ah, yes, so true! All of my poetry has become autobiographical. I should not project that on anyone .. read more
What a beautiful song of the heart and soul. I can hear the cadence in my ears...:)....................

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

I am indeed glad you liked ;-)
Many thanks, Sami!
Enjoy your weekend :-)
Sami Khalil

8 Months Ago

You too. You are welcome. ...:::)))
Delightfully romantic! The flow is easy and has a dreaminess about it. Nicely done. Regards Ray x

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

I don't know if you can see it from there a: read more? Crazy thing, I did not write it...lol...it w.. read more
aLittlePain

8 Months Ago

Haha...that's very cute :)
Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

:-) :-) Hahahaaa
I loved the phrase you have used. 'Lady in white' very well written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much!!!
:-)
Sil
So delightful and romantic...
The flow is Charming and so are the words... I like this piece very much..
keep writing dear...
Anindita

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Many thanks indeed for your kind words!
I will...lol...
:-)
Sil
Beuatifully Written RoamanTic SOng With Humongous Feelings......

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sikandar Khan

8 Months Ago

Your Poetry Is So Romantic
I Am Feeling Great And True Feeling OF Love In It.......
Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Then I am glad! :-)
Sikandar Khan

8 Months Ago

Yeah You Must be glad Because You HAve Wrote it With Beuatifull Feelings...
I like your joyful outlook. It's very optimistic and romantic

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

I am sorry D. I don't know for sure but I think sometimes comments appear way after it was written h.. read more
I like the way this series of observations also tells a story. A glimpse into the future ("soon I will be your lady in white") is what makes this message more meaningful than just expressing feelings with nicely crafted references to sun, dawn, starry sky, & delights. This glimpse shows me why the narrator is literally singing with happiness.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Helooo... and sorry, I don't know how I did not see your review before :-)
Thanks indeed for .. read more
barleygirl

8 Months Ago

No worries . . . I've been off on a tangent myself (((HUGS)))
Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

:-)!!! Hugssss

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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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