The Beautiful Song

The Beautiful Song

A Poem by Silmara McGarry



               Look at me while I sing the beautiful song.
                Tell me that without me you can’t live on.
                Stay with me under unclouded warm sun,
                let the rays of light show you a new dawn.
                    Lay with me under glaring starry sky,
             Not ever forgetting that you will always be mine.
                         Be my knight for all my life, 
                  sharing with me unforgettable delights.
                       Soon I will be your lady in white,
           forever singing to you, the beautiful song of our lives.

© 2017 Silmara McGarry



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Silmara McGarry
Maybe a little too romantic and sweet for some....BUT: Why not, hum?!!! 😊😉

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Lovely... simply lovely, I like how it appears like a little song, Your heart softly dance though Your words, simple thoughts of the girl's dream, yet they are all her dream... the photo is so gentle, reflecting the graceful melody of Your beautiful song.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Silmara McGarry

2 Weeks Ago

Wonderful words like blessings to my eyes. I am so thankfullll :-)))



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And I'm sure it will feel like a masterpiece.

Nicely done Sil. :)

Posted 2 Days Ago


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Silmara McGarry

2 Days Ago

Hey :-) Thank you soooo very much!!!
Have a great rest ;-)
Lovely... simply lovely, I like how it appears like a little song, Your heart softly dance though Your words, simple thoughts of the girl's dream, yet they are all her dream... the photo is so gentle, reflecting the graceful melody of Your beautiful song.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Silmara McGarry

2 Weeks Ago

Wonderful words like blessings to my eyes. I am so thankfullll :-)))
"Be my knight for all my life,
sharing with me unforgettable delights.
Soon I will be your lady in white,
forever singing to you, the beautiful song of our lives."

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Silmara McGarry

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you!!! :-)
Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

:)....................
Beautiful, hopeful and kind words. I liked the positive energy of these words. When two can sing the same song. A wonderful life. Thank you Silmara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so very much! :-)))
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

You are welcome my friend.
What a wonderful sweet song of love. I enjoyed reading this eloquent promise of devotion to your knight. Wishing that your romance is as fairy-tale sweet as this offering.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Silmara McGarry

2 Weeks Ago

Ohhh... Many thanks dear Fabian. I am so glad you enjoyed...I wish also ;-)
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Sky
And seriously, that's a very beautiful soon with a very picture bright.

Soon I will be your lady in white,
forever singing to you, the beautiful song of our lives.

Very cozy lines...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Sky

2 Weeks Ago

OHHHH.....LOL...Indeed your welocme for writing it, so nice ;-)....:-)))).... Thank you....Thank you.. read more
Sky

2 Weeks Ago

Opps, i forgot to replace those last two Thank you with welcome and smile...lol sorry!!
Silmara McGarry

2 Weeks Ago

;-)))))...lol
Lovely. A very romantic & faithful lullaby you sing to your lovers... allowing his heart to be yours, letting yours be his. Beautifully written!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

Many thanks indeed for taking the time to read and such wonderful review, Adams ;-)
It was a pleasure to read this poem. Another one to add in my favourites :)

Lyla

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Months Ago

Hey Lyla :-) That is so kind of you...Many thanks indeed dear!!!

See you,
;-)<.. read more
How your words seem to prepare the soul for your blessed union with your beloved knight. And yes, loving and living as one should create the most beautiful music the world has ever known.

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

Or "her" blessed union with her beloved knight :-)
Wonderful review and words, thank you so m.. read more
An owl on the moon

10 Months Ago

Ah, yes, so true! All of my poetry has become autobiographical. I should not project that on anyone .. read more

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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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