Apocalypse

Apocalypse

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Just something totally off the wall for a contest... no offense to anyone just found a cool pic and came up with the idea.

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God said, “Please set fire…

To each living soul that’s sinned.”

He watched as we burned



© 2015 AaronFreitas



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Revelations 'number of the beast' often stirs my thoughts - perhaps it just a way of describing sinners who havent repented or have no intention of doing so. In which case this is totally step two.
Great bit of fantasy inspired by a very intriguing image. Nice exercise A.
Good luck in the contest :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you ANTO... it was fun and a different perspective on the belief our savior will return to Ear.. read more



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We are all sinners and watching us burn now in our stupid earthly lives as we wait for our time here to burn out and end so we can move to a better table with the master at the head. Well done loyal servant.




Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Willard :) You are absolutely right my friend :)
WAH we will all burn!!! :( lol

I loved it though. Nice imagery. :) :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you MissLaine :) haha it was something a little different but fun to do :)
MissLaine

2 Years Ago

:) no problem. mmhmm :D
Well, I have read many times that we will all burn, whether you're going to hell or heaven, because there's a part in the bible that says that we have to be burned to be pure again. The last line of the poem captures the image completely in its own. Great job and choice of words!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Alondra :) It was something a little different but it's kind of a unique way to look at t.. read more
I like the poem, I want to be there watching when Father God burns the laughing demons

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

:) That does sound like fun doesn't it ;) Appreciate your comment my friend :) It's been a long t.. read more
The world will turn to ashes then. We all are sinners.
Profound piece!
Astounding imagery!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jyoti :) It's tough writing in that format but the picture in my head was clear. Then I e.. read more
Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Cool!
You are very welcome. :)
What a deep meaning in something only a few words long. Such deep thinking can only be urs.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Scribbler :) I wanted to do something a little different so it means a lot you got it :)
XD where's the fire extinguisher???!!!!!! Lol.
nice little poem. xD world burns... would spare the bills for the winter. lmao. :D just kiddin.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

haha thanks for your comments... I had fun with it :)
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
Revelations 'number of the beast' often stirs my thoughts - perhaps it just a way of describing sinners who havent repented or have no intention of doing so. In which case this is totally step two.
Great bit of fantasy inspired by a very intriguing image. Nice exercise A.
Good luck in the contest :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you ANTO... it was fun and a different perspective on the belief our savior will return to Ear.. read more

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