JUST SAY THE WORDS

JUST SAY THE WORDS

A Poem by KCthelastboyscout
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The relationship is over... don't prolong it

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Just say the words... Let's end this amicably. No more fighting. No more shouting. No more arguments. No more silent treatments. No more sleepless nights together. No more sleepless nights apart. Let's stop hurting each other and just say the words...Whatever we had that connected us is broken. The chain we were both bound to was rusted and weak. Now we are both lost in limbo headed in separate directions. But we have to come together once more. Come to a place we will always remember when we broke each other's hearts. Let's find our courage. Look each other in the eye... And just say the words

© 2018 KCthelastboyscout



Author's Note

KCthelastboyscout
Some people waste too much of their time acknowledging a part of their life has ended

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The below lines mus be done. Hard to do.
" But we have to come together once more."
Regret and anger. Heavy weight to carry forever. Forgiveness is necessary. At least middle ground. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I can not relate. I have only been in one long term relationship, that I am still in. I would hate to go through what you wrote up there as many times as some do. Good writing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Very relatable. I think we've all been here at some point in our lives.

I like the sentiment of the poem~ being honest, being real, being kind about a situation that many people drag, and are very unkind about.

Yari

Posted 8 Months Ago


Relationships are difficult and when it is over sometimes it is hard to let go. Great words. Cheers!

Posted 8 Months Ago


The below lines mus be done. Hard to do.
" But we have to come together once more."
Regret and anger. Heavy weight to carry forever. Forgiveness is necessary. At least middle ground. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think the young man in the poem was quite right. If it is over, just acknowledge it! And the ending is superb... going back to a place where the hearts were broken, and accepting (perhaps with a smile?) that it is over. Well written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your living with and loving this woman for so long makes it very hard to say good bye but your wrote it so well as you usually do a sad piece but well done
ps i hope that you are not in too much pain

Posted 8 Months Ago


I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. The use of words and short sentences are superb. Well done!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Well said and oh so sad when it comes to this ~ but, sometimes “it’s for the best” even if it’s hard to do.

I pray that you are doing well and the New Year has been good so far.

Take care and keep the words flowing my friend. 🌹

Blessings, 🙏
~ hsg

Posted 8 Months Ago


That’s why I look forward to reading your work. To hang onto what is no longer there for fear of having nothing at all keeps us from truly living, bonded as you said by rusted chains.

Posted 8 Months Ago



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