Memories

Memories

A Poem by wordman



In the misty waters

of my mind,

i reminisce of the hallowed,

memories that i left behind.

 

Once as vivid

as night and day

now only misty memories

slowly fading away

 

Fading away

like a gentle breeze

on a summers day

but it seems everything fades away

 

Even those

hallowed memories

of me and you,and the feelings,

that we once knew...


© 2017 wordman



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A beautiful poem. Feel of ancient times and ancient words. You made the reader feel and understand the emotions. The poem left the reader with the feeling of sadness. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Day Ago


 wordman

1 Day Ago

thaks john,turned out to be a sad write
Coyote Poetry

15 Hours Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Nice lines ...
Memories can't be erasable...well done poet

Posted 1 Day Ago


 wordman

1 Day Ago

thank you for the visit
shruthi

5 Hours Ago

You are most Welcome
Strong and real... well said Wordman.

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

good to see you chris,,thanks
Feelings grow old n cold but never forgotten. Thanks again for your wonderful poetry.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you for reading my junk
ROXANE DORSEY

1 Week Ago

no its not junk to this poetess. thanks
This poem is amazing. Honestly, my favorite kind of poetry. Sometimes, the moments you want to last forever, fade into memories. And the moments you wish you didn't remember, become your entire life.


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you,glad you liked it
Although not my usual cup of tea, I liked this love poem of yours a lot, so full of pathos & pain. I imagine it must have hurt just writing it? Glad I found it wordman.........All Good Things, Neville

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

glad you found it to ! ,thank you
Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

my pleasure entirely
"Even those

hallowed memories

of me and you,and the feelings,

that we once knew..."

How sad to let go at times.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic words dancing with a harrowing tone, I like it.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

thank you for the visit
 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

make a song out of it
This gave me chills. Very relatable for anyone that has been through loss of any kind

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading
The candle was very comforting when I opened the page. Memories hurt at times whether they are bittersweet, horror, or Ecstasy, and so on. I love how you attach nature to ease the tone. At times, we don't always remember the past correctly. Trauma ends up repressing bad memories.

Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading
Vria P Crow

1 Month Ago

Your welcome. Have a splendid day!

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