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Memories

Memories

A Poem by wordman



In the misty waters

of my mind,

i reminisce of the hallowed,

memories that i left behind.

 

Once as vivid

as night and day

now only misty memories

slowly fading away

 

Fading away

like a gentle breeze

on a summers day

but it seems everything fades away

 

Even those

hallowed memories

of me and you,and the feelings,

that we once knew...


© 2017 wordman



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This is so sweet, and there is a sense of longing that is beautiful.

Posted 3 Days Ago


 wordman

3 Days Ago

thank you for the visit..
Everybody knows what a poem means and a day later they know it means something else. I know something that won't change and that's the sound and feel of this poem. Tomorrow it will sound just as sweet and feel just as good.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for that kind review,thanks
i am happy to know that this poem describes the steps towards moving on, and it is really true that not all memories deserved to be kept and treasured, there will come a time that it has to be thrown away and be forgotten.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

it covers many things,memory loss from a disease maybe,thank you for reading
sette

2 Weeks Ago

you are very much welcome, i will review the elusive woman later.
it was simply beautiful! the flow of it overall was just amazing

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for the visit
"now only misty memories

slowly fading away



Fading away

like a gentle breeze"

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

i kinda like this one my self,thanks for the visit
Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

You are welcome...
This is the way it is! Everything that is sharp and clear and bright fades away to a shadow of what it was. Live moves on for everyone and we reach another stage but with luck we have new memories to savour.
Well done for this reflection on life.
Kindest regards, alan

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for the visit alan,yes it does,but they are wonderful to have
Love the ebb and flow of this great poetry of yours now I know some of the fun you only have just begun.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you my friend
This is one of your best Wordman. I enjoyed the rhymes and the rhythm of this one very much.

Bravo!

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

appreciate your visit..
Very well written. Memories can seem so nostalgic and beautiful, and you captured that here.

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
A beautiful poem. Feel of ancient times and ancient words. You made the reader feel and understand the emotions. The poem left the reader with the feeling of sadness. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thaks john,turned out to be a sad write
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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