In Between (Gray)

I see the smile

I see the teeth

One blue eye

One red

I see the wings

One black

One white

I see this creature

In the night

It haunts my morning

And kills my nights

I can’t forget  it’s face

Though happy and sad

Mixed it was

For my evil

For my good

All stuck into one

Form my demon

It stands

Right there

With the angel

For we are between

We are that from above

We are the from below

We are the angels

We are the demons

We are the humans

But it’s my soul

Dark and life

I am gray

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Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

This one was pretty good. But maybe use of punctuation would help the flow of the poem a bit more. like these few lines...
"I see the smile,
I see the teeth.
One blue eye,
One red.
I see the wings -
One black,
One white." Something like that. But it's pretty good all in all!

[Emilia Kuemin]

I really do like this one, but I believe you should re-check how you break it up into lines, some of them should be combined into one line. Cuz, to me at least, when you break to a new line it's like signifying a pause.

[Mauricio Montoya]

The choice of words that bring this write together allows me to visualize what you describe. Nice work

[r]

This poem is awesome. I love it. It's dark and simply wonderful.

[nono]

really nice it's awesome i could read it over and over again!