I Need A Hug

I Need A Hug

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

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If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything




© 2013 Akshat♥


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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)



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To reach out and touch someone must have been an impulse we came to adore after the physical nature of life came into being. It brings an assurance to the heart as much as mind that our life's experiences are real. Your poem is a timely reminder.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Simple and lovely! It was like a gust of fresh air! A simple hug can do wonders when you are down! Nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Hugs are the best they are comfort at its best.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

yes, you are right...
*hugs* YOU POOR THING!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I used to be one of the most anti-physical people ever... I never hugged my best friends or family. I actually had to be taught how to hug lol Now, I can't get enough of them! thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

You are welcome!!
I know the feeling of needing a hug. Sometime need a friend to help you get over the pain and sadness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
coming from someone who could use a hug, this is an amazing poem! I love it!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
K-mo

8 Years Ago

your welcome! I really could relate to this poem

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