I Need A Hug

Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything

Author's Note

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Your review means a lot to me..

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Lily Mae]

We all need hugs..it's a safe place to heal..xo

[Akshat♥]

Yeah right..

[joshua deathdealer]

Sometimes a little time spent with that special someone can make all the difference in the world.

[Akshat♥]

Right!

[Hatchling]

very nice

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Hatchling]

your welcome

[The dark story]

wow.such a pretty poem filled with pure emotions and thoughts......really heart touching .i really liked that line."Your arms just feel like home".......i like the diction too... yes.revise the fifth stanza again(sorry.a typing mistake0.........
.ummm.sorry.i think i'm too small to rate it.but i can only say it is great!!!

[Akshat♥]

You are not small...
Thank you :)

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

..............very nice. You have written emotionally and the entire poem is very good. Best wishes.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Chris Taylor]

Though simply written, I can feel the emotion of this poem. Good effort here.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Katseye]

Very nice, can see the scene well. That simple place where words aren't needed.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Grace Catherine C.]

Very sweet, nicely done.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

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Aww its beautiful! :3 ^-^ I know what you mean I need a hug badly right now but I'll give you one cause of your pretty and awesome poem! c(^-^c)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Crazy Cat Man]

nice

[Akshat♥]

thank you :)