I Need A Hug

I Need A Hug

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

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If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything




© 2013 Akshat♥


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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)



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This poem feels sincere and heartfelt. It surely makes me want to hug.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
right now I could use one because sometimes you can't forget.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

It happens..
This is great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Its is awesome! Exactly what I was feeling yesterday. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Something we all need. Good write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Ah, who hasn't experienced this before. Sometimes all we need is comfort and security. You have a keen eye into relationships. Lovely honest writing. It spoke a lot to me, especially because I just went through a break up. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

You are welcome dear:)
so profound and deep. I know what you mean here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
we all need at least one hug a day.
Excellent write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
It's really nice to have someone there for you when times are tough and the reminder of life is too strong for your emotions to control. Thank God for the ability to hug... hugs are one of my favorite things that us humans are able to do and it always makes me feel better, even if I were already in an amazing mood... it only makes it brighter.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Lovely poem.
It touched me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)

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