Since The Day I Met You

Just came to my mind :)

Since the day I met you
You brighten up my life
We talk so less
The silence was so right
We found care 
in each other's eyes

Since the day I met you
My silence is over
My weakness turned into strength
You become by motivation
You take me away 
from my lonely life

Since the day I met you
My day gets over so fast
I love each and every 
moment of my life

Whenever you say 'Hi'
it felt like you touched my heart
and there's nothing left to prove


Since the day I met you
It felt like I already knew you
Your face seems so familiar
all the scars you have
shows the strength of you

Since the day I met you
Sharing is an excuse to be with you
You changed the way I saw the world

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

I gave this romantic caring heartfelt poem 100 rating . we all fall in love and many times some continue to love when another has gone a stray this is beautiful I hope to see more of you writings soon. Greatly and well put together. You have it in you that sweet love and romance what ever girl you have a hold of in heart should feel and be lucky and greatful to have such love. God Bless.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you...check out my new poem-a friend:)

[Belinda Rice]

Will do not a problem happy thanksgiving

[Akshat♥]

happy thanksgiving to you too :)

[Petals & Pearls]

Again, the flow isn't right... if you are to rhyme anything in a poem, the the rest of the poem must fallow suit and the composition of the first stanza, with only a few exceptions.

[Akshat♥]

Ok..thank you for your views...by the way try to see good things also..

[TheSweet]

For me, a bit too soppy. But that's just because I'm a miserable sot :P I did, however, quite like the message, and feelings like that are worthy to write in a poem :) So, thanks for sharing.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you for reading it :)

[Sarah]

I love the las verse. Lovely and realy sweet

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[sivan]

Since the day I met you
Sharing is an excuse to be with you
You changed the way I saw the world
as i said these poems i am reading are hitting home because i am hopelessly devoted to a girl and love comes unconditional between her and myself

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[prachi prangya agasti]

nice poem....and good portray of emotions....

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[misha]

This was a great poem!!!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[pragati]

your emotions show...its beautiful ......

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Neha Godambe]

Awwwww.... Very neat, Sugary sweet! Nice one again

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

another sweet poem.. I really like the flow of this one. My only suggestion.. lose the colored fonts. Not only are they distracting, but if you were ever to get your poetry published, no editors would take your work seriously. The poem should direct emphasis, not the color of the font. Just a suggestion.

[Akshat♥]

Okay..am changing it :) Thank you dear:)

[rhythm&blues]

Love can certainly change our lives and lifts our spirits.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)