Don't say goodbye

Times running out on us.
I came back too late.
I hope to stay with you until the first snow.
So I can wear those socks that you bought me.
But I will die before that,because of you.
I know it hurts for you to be with me.
But I love you.

Look at me.

 

It is just the beginning .
It will hurt more later.
You will hurt more than me.

 

 

I wish I'd hurt for you.
Don't take me suddenly.
Give me enough time
to say goodbye.

 

 

Fool.If it hurts,scream.
Hold me and cry.
Don't try to hide it.
It hurts me so much.
I feel as if I'd die before you!
My heart.. It's broken.
Because I love you enough
for my heart to burn.
Medicine doesn't work anymore.

 

 

It is raining.
The rain can't cool down
my love for you.

 

Come on,don't follow me
into my dreams.

 

When I am with you at night
it feels as if it were day.

 

Now I believe that phrase

that you can see with eyes closed.

 

I am still waiting for that day to come...

Don't say goodbye. . .

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[.shalynn.009.]

"Times running out on us." Should be "Time's"

"I hope to stay with you until the first snow.
So I can wear those socks that you bought me." I like these lines. Something so simple that means so much. It's the small things that mean a lot.

"Come on,don't follow me" I like the contrast within this one line.

Although this isn't my favorite poem of yours, I like it. Saying goodbye is a hard thing, and you got the heartbreak and difficulty of it across well. Good job.

[Julie Beth]

this was amazing you did such a great job :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good write..!!!

[Ashley Myers]

sounds to me like two people in love are being torn apart because one is deathly sick and the other is not ready to say goodbye. as morbid as it sounds, sounds like the person youre talking about has some kind of cancer and is slowly dying. maybe im way off base, but thats what i got, and its so sad.

[sarah]

Wow this is amazing! such a great write

[RJM]

The persona is so miserable and heartbroken, nice write it's been a while since i've read dark poetry

[Michael Jarrell]

Great write. Very dark... the way I like it :)

[JanieB]

I really like this, well done.

[Akshat♥]

please give reviews:)